Triskaidekaphobia
Fear of # 13 Acrostic15 total reviews
Comment from Heaven Bound
Good poem; interesting subject. I can't figure out why so many people have trouble with the #13? Very nice font color and use in contrast. Thanks.
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Good poem; interesting subject. I can't figure out why so many people have trouble with the #13? Very nice font color and use in contrast. Thanks.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
Comment from zlp22
Great poem and fun to read. I really don't know why people don't like that number, it doesn't matter to me.Word flow was kept poem interesting. Good luck in the contest.
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Great poem and fun to read. I really don't know why people don't like that number, it doesn't matter to me.Word flow was kept poem interesting. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
Comment from mr elis
From child hood we live under the impression that 13,scared the hell out of us and we're on the look out for that date each month.As the writer said one generation comes and one generation goes the sun also rises.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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From child hood we live under the impression that 13,scared the hell out of us and we're on the look out for that date each month.As the writer said one generation comes and one generation goes the sun also rises.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Hi Mr Elis, Sorry I didn't impress you a little bit more with my acrostic,but I do appreciate your review. Thank you! :o) Helvi
Comment from Bill Schott
I have never understood the fear of the number thirteen, but I do know of people who hav used it as a decision making tool. Nice poem.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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I have never understood the fear of the number thirteen, but I do know of people who hav used it as a decision making tool. Nice poem.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Hi Bill, It doesn't stop me in my tracks, but I am wary of it! I have NO idea WHY? I had a lot of fun writing this! I'm glad you enjoyed it and appreciate the wonderful review. Thanks SO much! :o) Helvi
Comment from Bojenn
Before finishing your poem, I loved it. The clever way you wrote each sentence caught me before midway. And, normally this type of poem which spells out a word, Acrostic, is not my favorite, but yours is enjoyable, catchy and I really like your title.
Good job.
Bojenn
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Before finishing your poem, I loved it. The clever way you wrote each sentence caught me before midway. And, normally this type of poem which spells out a word, Acrostic, is not my favorite, but yours is enjoyable, catchy and I really like your title.
Good job.
Bojenn
Comment Written 17-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Hi Bojenn, Thank you SO much for the extraordinary review! I am SO glad you enjoyed this! Since no-one ever said you had to write acrostics in a straight line, if it's possible I like to have fun with them, I really am honored by your six star review. :o) Helvi