Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Author
You heartfelt plea in writing is beautifully written with concrete imagery. I enjoy your very good narrative voice and great detailed writing. I liked what you penned: "remove her worries & Let her witness your healing powers."
Comments: I wish you good luck in the Dear God, writing prompt.. I would recommend your piece to other reviewers. Blessed day to you.
Missy.

 Comment Written 06-May-2012

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reply by the author on 06-May-2012

Missy thanks so much for your kindness. Blessings and LOL

Comment from katmckeown

Excellent

I give you 5 stars for writing from your heart. Know that I will agree with you in prayer. You appear to have meet you criteria so I will simple say. AMEN. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Thanks for touching out and agreeing with me in prayer. Blessings and LOL

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

This is a beautiful story with your prayer for you friend. I like this line particularly: Please, stop by and remove her worries, fears and pains. Let her witness your healing powers. Kat

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Thanks so much! Blessings and LOL

Comment from Crackerberries

Excellent

I am reading so many great and wonderful letters... very poignant, very well done and this one has that added touch of "don't care about winning this contest, please touch, heal and deliver my friend."...very well done.

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Thanks very kindly!! LOL

Comment from WilliamDeen

Excellent

Your Dear God Letter, Dear God, is absolutely wonderful. How sweet of you to think of your friend and send this letter for her. I will say a prayer for her too.

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Thank you so much, you are so kind. Blessings and LOL

Comment from poetstar

Excellent

Heavenly Father, Please heal this dear friend mentioned in this writing. Bless Pharp for unselfishly using this contest to help another in time of need. I enjoyed this well written and uplifting writing. Sincerely Poetstar/Vonnie

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Bless you my friend. There are so many loving and kind people on this site and you are one of them! Thanking God for you!

Comment from MumEsGirl

Excellent

Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful prayer. Fan Story has been a source of so much support and friendship to me that I can only add my prayers to yours for this special person.

hugs
kate

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Kate, thanks so much for your loving kindness and prayers for my friend. Blessings and LOL

Comment from light

Excellent

I join with you for your prayer for a friend. I also have a friend who has received dire news. I pray for healing for all who need it.
Elaine

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Thanks Elaine, my prayers are with your friend as well. Blessings and LOL

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

Let's hope God will read your letter and relieve your friend's worries. In the meantime, he might see fit to make you the contest winner.


This is a spiritual fiesta!

DW

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Thanks for your rating and review. You know, "if" God see fit to make me the contest winner, my friend will receive a double blessing, the prize will be forward to her. Blessings and LOL

Comment from Earl of Oxford

Excellent

This is a very strong letter, and I wonder if it's the first time, or not, God has been thanked for this site. Maybe 'Tom' thanks Him for all the money he earns out of it. ;-)

Very sweet to unselfishly just wish for help for your friend, whose health I hope improves.

Personally, I'd remove the 'contest' reference, as it seems completely out of place to me, and I wonder if your comment is really true deep in your sub conscious. If you don't care, then why mention it, and why not release something similar that is not in a contest and save yourself the entry fee of $5? I'm not questioning your integrity, just offering my honest opinion as to how some may read that part.

Hey, if you win and don't want the 'dollars', then maybe you'd send the prize to me, as I'd sure appreciate it. LOL

Have a lovely weekend, earl.

 Comment Written 05-May-2012

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reply by the author on 05-May-2012

Since only God knows my heart, I'll just leave my letter to God intact; if I do win the "dollars", I'll send the prize to my sick friend. Thanks for your rating, review and comments.
It is such a beautiful day, have a lovely weekend as well. Blessings and LOL

reply by Earl of Oxford on 05-May-2012

LOL - thanks for your gracious reply. earl