Miss Higgledy Piggledy
36 total reviews
Comment from P1
now this would be my kind of kids poetry
all fun and up in the air and messey and
feel good
loved it very much the speed and the feel
good factor throughout. good luck with it
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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now this would be my kind of kids poetry
all fun and up in the air and messey and
feel good
loved it very much the speed and the feel
good factor throughout. good luck with it
Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much, Paige, for this lovely review! I came 2nd with this one, the winner really did desrve it. I am glad you enjoyed mine though!! Thank you again. xsx
Comment from Chris Tee
Sandra, this is fantastic poetry for kiddies and also teach them to be neat in their rooms, Smarty Pants was a real shrewd operator to get his sister to tidy up. Excellent work ma'am.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Sandra, this is fantastic poetry for kiddies and also teach them to be neat in their rooms, Smarty Pants was a real shrewd operator to get his sister to tidy up. Excellent work ma'am.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for this lovely review, Chris, I really appreciate it a lot! Thank you! xsx
Comment from uniqueauthor
This is a well written read with a moral and a messsage loud and clear. One clean room soon begets two, just drop a few pennies and see.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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This is a well written read with a moral and a messsage loud and clear. One clean room soon begets two, just drop a few pennies and see.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for this really lovely review, Linda! I appreciate it a lot, thank you. xsx
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You're welcome. Peace for today
Comment from ennahanid
This is just so amazingly, brilliantly beyond good and it found my funny bone and got me tickled right away. You really do excel with these wonderful children's piece that you write and it is such an honor to read them.
Thank you for a big day brightener today...Dinah
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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This is just so amazingly, brilliantly beyond good and it found my funny bone and got me tickled right away. You really do excel with these wonderful children's piece that you write and it is such an honor to read them.
Thank you for a big day brightener today...Dinah
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you so very much, Dinah, for this really, really amazing review!! Your reviews mean so much to me, coming from someone who can really write such wonderful poetry, thank you! xsx
Comment from tinams
This is a wonderful story in a poem. This wold be lovely as a big colorful picture book. Young children would enjoy this very much. I know my grandchildren would love it :) Tina
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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This is a wonderful story in a poem. This wold be lovely as a big colorful picture book. Young children would enjoy this very much. I know my grandchildren would love it :) Tina
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review,Tina, if the children will enjoy it, that is all I could ask for, thank you again, so much. xsx
Comment from squid152
This poem is sheer genius. You have a gift! You took me for a ride, like watching a cartoon as a kid. Your flow is running through me like a sweet sound of melody. Your occasional rhyme is what makes the story. Your prose Is like listening to my kindergarten teacher reading a story. I work with children for a living and would be honored to read this work for them. If I could give you a ten, I would. Smarty Pants is a term I have not heard since I was a child. You have captured universal memories with this poem, not easily done. I am in awe!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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This poem is sheer genius. You have a gift! You took me for a ride, like watching a cartoon as a kid. Your flow is running through me like a sweet sound of melody. Your occasional rhyme is what makes the story. Your prose Is like listening to my kindergarten teacher reading a story. I work with children for a living and would be honored to read this work for them. If I could give you a ten, I would. Smarty Pants is a term I have not heard since I was a child. You have captured universal memories with this poem, not easily done. I am in awe!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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What can I say after a review like that!! Goodness me, Squid, thank you so very, very much! I would be the honored one if you read that to the children, but thank you so very much also for the 6 stars, and I am glad you liked Smarty Pants!!
Comment from mazi jee
A cute story with a message. Except the last two line kind of delete it since children would catch on that sister had been tricked. But I loved the description of both rooms and the idea that he found pennies.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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A cute story with a message. Except the last two line kind of delete it since children would catch on that sister had been tricked. But I loved the description of both rooms and the idea that he found pennies.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thankyou Mazi jee, for your lovely review. I thought it would be a good idea to give the boys the credit this time! Thank you again. xsx
Comment from Spitfire
A cute story with a message. Except the last two line kind of delete it since children would catch on that sister had been tricked. But I loved the description of both rooms and the idea that he found pennies.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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A cute story with a message. Except the last two line kind of delete it since children would catch on that sister had been tricked. But I loved the description of both rooms and the idea that he found pennies.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thank you Spitfire for you lovely review!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a fun poem with a light-weight moral about keeping one's room clean. (Spelling alert: In stanza three, "peaked into his room," should be spelled PEEKED.") Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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This is a fun poem with a light-weight moral about keeping one's room clean. (Spelling alert: In stanza three, "peaked into his room," should be spelled PEEKED.") Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Jeanie, for you lovely review, and thank you for picking up the spelling mistake, I have just corrected it, thank you!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Hi, I think I know who did this!
I like your style!Cute poem and
a good motivating story for children.
Best of luck in the contest. Well done
Honeycomb
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Hi, I think I know who did this!
I like your style!Cute poem and
a good motivating story for children.
Best of luck in the contest. Well done
Honeycomb
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thank you Honeycomb! We will see! Thank you for this lovely review!
