Clutter
Sorting out the priorities in life.19 total reviews
Comment from ladydp2000
I pretty much enjoyed your excellent free style poem about spiritual clutter, and found it very inspirational indeed.
It would be very nice if every christian would do this and give the control of God and Jesus, instead of trying to control everything ourselves even when we know we can't.Wise advice! Very much so.We need to clean the clutter often as much as possible, the material one and the spiritual one of course. lol...if we dont learn to do this, we get in trouble sooner or later. O my, I hate clutter of any kind so much!
Clutter of any sort is very bad anyway. Enjoyed your poem honeycomb!
:) God bless you! D.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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I pretty much enjoyed your excellent free style poem about spiritual clutter, and found it very inspirational indeed.
It would be very nice if every christian would do this and give the control of God and Jesus, instead of trying to control everything ourselves even when we know we can't.Wise advice! Very much so.We need to clean the clutter often as much as possible, the material one and the spiritual one of course. lol...if we dont learn to do this, we get in trouble sooner or later. O my, I hate clutter of any kind so much!
Clutter of any sort is very bad anyway. Enjoyed your poem honeycomb!
:) God bless you! D.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you D, Thank you so much for the Six! God bless you too! Honeycomb
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Honeycomb,
great poem with very good advice
Easy to read and definitely a good way to empty ones cluttered mind.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Hello Honeycomb,
great poem with very good advice
Easy to read and definitely a good way to empty ones cluttered mind.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Hi Gert! Thank you for the review.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from artemis53
Words truer couldn't be said. I really enjoy this honest piece, Honey. I am one who can turn peace into chaos in the wink of an eye. I'm doing better but only by keeping faith and perspective clearly in front of myself
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Words truer couldn't be said. I really enjoy this honest piece, Honey. I am one who can turn peace into chaos in the wink of an eye. I'm doing better but only by keeping faith and perspective clearly in front of myself
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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You will make it, just lean on Him. Thank you for the review.
Honey (comb)
Comment from adewpearl
Good use of abcb rhyme and your lines have a good steady cadence when read aloud :-)
Effective use of "clutter" as image
I also like the message that the answer to our prayers is not always the answer we had already decided would be the right one :-)
good alliteration in learned a lesson
Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Good use of abcb rhyme and your lines have a good steady cadence when read aloud :-)
Effective use of "clutter" as image
I also like the message that the answer to our prayers is not always the answer we had already decided would be the right one :-)
good alliteration in learned a lesson
Brooke
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I'm glad you liked it Brooke. I think I had a little guidence when I wrote it this morning. It was like writing a letter.
The picture was my inspiration, nota pretty picture but it works. Honeycomb
Comment from Janie King
I'm not a poet so I only review from what I feel..this is a very thoguth provoking poem and paints a grand picture in the readers mind..God has you covered..just walk with Him and let Him straighten out the problems areas of your life. Great job. God bless.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I'm not a poet so I only review from what I feel..this is a very thoguth provoking poem and paints a grand picture in the readers mind..God has you covered..just walk with Him and let Him straighten out the problems areas of your life. Great job. God bless.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you very much Janie, he will lead you if you will follow. Bless you. Honeycomb
Comment from KiaraLG
How very true and how well you've conveyed this most important lesson! Trust in Him and everything else will fall into place.
Thank you so much for sharing this!
Kiara :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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How very true and how well you've conveyed this most important lesson! Trust in Him and everything else will fall into place.
Thank you so much for sharing this!
Kiara :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read it.Honeycomb
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Anytime ;)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, Jesus would make things so easy for us if only we'd
ask, wait, and be open to His leading. Only He can clean out the dross. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Yes, Jesus would make things so easy for us if only we'd
ask, wait, and be open to His leading. Only He can clean out the dross. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you Janice. Good advice, hard to follow. But we should try. Honeycomb
Comment from LilHippie
This is surely what faith is all about. I cannot even express how many lines in your piece were pearls of wisdom my beloved mother gave me (not in prose, and with her beautiful German accent, but same advice). This should be used for self-help groups of parents dealing with addicted children or emotionally challenged children. Thank you for this beautiful reminder that life is our daily struggle to "feel" normal (if normal is at least being at peace with life). So much said here, and the flow is lovely. Thank you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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This is surely what faith is all about. I cannot even express how many lines in your piece were pearls of wisdom my beloved mother gave me (not in prose, and with her beautiful German accent, but same advice). This should be used for self-help groups of parents dealing with addicted children or emotionally challenged children. Thank you for this beautiful reminder that life is our daily struggle to "feel" normal (if normal is at least being at peace with life). So much said here, and the flow is lovely. Thank you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I would be so happy if it did help in any way . That is why we write about Him isn't it? God bless you Honeycomb
Comment from TammyGail
I enjoyed your poem Honeycomb it was well written and expressed, heartfelt and creative. Lovely imagery used alongside your verse thanks for sharing it was a pleasure.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I enjoyed your poem Honeycomb it was well written and expressed, heartfelt and creative. Lovely imagery used alongside your verse thanks for sharing it was a pleasure.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your review Tammy, you aoponion is very happily received. Honeycomb