Thoughts on Religion.
An Acrostic about faith.34 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
I love your acrostic poem Ina.The words and clip are so childlike and precious. We are all called to become as a little child. Simply put,'trusting.'Very well written,and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
I love your acrostic poem Ina.The words and clip are so childlike and precious. We are all called to become as a little child. Simply put,'trusting.'Very well written,and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, ine
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Ine. Great work this poem. So true the words you wrote.
Religion is in us. No matter what your religion is. It is a way of living. We all believe in God, sometimes in another way, but we all have the same thoughts about Love ,Harmony
and compassion.Great job. Liefs Fia
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
Hi Ine. Great work this poem. So true the words you wrote.
Religion is in us. No matter what your religion is. It is a way of living. We all believe in God, sometimes in another way, but we all have the same thoughts about Love ,Harmony
and compassion.Great job. Liefs Fia
Comment Written 03-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Thanks so much for the six. Love those-LOL.
Third one in 12 hours I think. Forgot to phone yesterday-sorry.
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It does not matter, we talk another time. Liefs Fia
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we certainly will. Liefs, Ine
Comment from ameen786
Hello robina, my friend, in simple down to earth vocabulary you deliver a powerful message about universal brotherhood, I love it, thanks for sharing your sublime poetry.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
Hello robina, my friend, in simple down to earth vocabulary you deliver a powerful message about universal brotherhood, I love it, thanks for sharing your sublime poetry.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine
Comment from rchitwood
Very inspiring poem and I love the lesson in it for all of us.Your poem has smooth line flow and images of Faith.I love your music so cute and your photo compliments your poem well Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
Very inspiring poem and I love the lesson in it for all of us.Your poem has smooth line flow and images of Faith.I love your music so cute and your photo compliments your poem well Blessings Rita
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine
Comment from skye
This is a creative take on form, strong message about faith, wonderful imagery inside the lines.
Faith is strong, religion is necessary for so many of us.
I love this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
This is a creative take on form, strong message about faith, wonderful imagery inside the lines.
Faith is strong, religion is necessary for so many of us.
I love this poem.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine
Comment from Melspoems
Hi Ine, nice to see you in your pic :)
This is a clever poem about religion and faith, and how we should all try to live our lives.
I wonder if the last line would read better as "Near and in to heaven"
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
Hi Ine, nice to see you in your pic :)
This is a clever poem about religion and faith, and how we should all try to live our lives.
I wonder if the last line would read better as "Near and in to heaven"
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Will check.
Comment from misscookie
I think tyhe artwork is awesome.
and it goes well with your lovely oem
your words are very uplifting and the vfideo was a perfect
touch. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
I think tyhe artwork is awesome.
and it goes well with your lovely oem
your words are very uplifting and the vfideo was a perfect
touch. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine
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It was my pleasure. Have a nice day.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Great acrostic on faith and what that means in our lives.
Nicely formed and flowed well from line to line.
"Though times can be rough
Hold on to your Faith"
These lines above were great openers for this faith poem. I have found holding on through the rapids of life with faith is the smoothest ride to freedom.
Thanks for sharing. And good luck in the contest.
Maureen
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
Great acrostic on faith and what that means in our lives.
Nicely formed and flowed well from line to line.
"Though times can be rough
Hold on to your Faith"
These lines above were great openers for this faith poem. I have found holding on through the rapids of life with faith is the smoothest ride to freedom.
Thanks for sharing. And good luck in the contest.
Maureen
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine
Comment from the blue pixel
This poem is one I just can't relate to Ine as I am sure you know but I can quite easily substitute your word Faith, for faith in myself. I agree, that we should not give hate to others, difficult as this may be sometimes. I often envy you and others, their Faith. It must be very comforting for you my friend. I am sorry I am unable to review this more constructrively for you but I have done my best for you. xx Pix
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
This poem is one I just can't relate to Ine as I am sure you know but I can quite easily substitute your word Faith, for faith in myself. I agree, that we should not give hate to others, difficult as this may be sometimes. I often envy you and others, their Faith. It must be very comforting for you my friend. I am sorry I am unable to review this more constructrively for you but I have done my best for you. xx Pix
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Appreciate that hon.
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You're always welcome Ine. This kind of poem is hard for me but because you wrote it, I did my best. xx Pix
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi robina,
I like your Acrostic contest poem
The only thing you should look at are the following lines
O r you might go down
U nder water --why water ?
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
Hi robina,
I like your Acrostic contest poem
The only thing you should look at are the following lines
O r you might go down
U nder water --why water ?
Gert
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Just came into my mind, sounded good.