Wife
A Clarity Pyramid15 total reviews
Comment from Rama Rao
A poem, a clarity poem about a wife in just seven lines is an impossible task for a wife is so much to write about. Whoever has designed the contest needs to be commended. Anyone who attempts to condense all the info into seven lines merits equal praise. I have been married for forty six years to one woman. If I say, I know her fully well I am guilty of fibbing. A wife is not like an open book. She looks and acts differently in different situations. Of course, she deserves all praise, but seven lines to praise her would be gross injustice to her.
However, you attempted a difficult task and succeeded to a limited extent.
I liked the poem especially the last line. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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A poem, a clarity poem about a wife in just seven lines is an impossible task for a wife is so much to write about. Whoever has designed the contest needs to be commended. Anyone who attempts to condense all the info into seven lines merits equal praise. I have been married for forty six years to one woman. If I say, I know her fully well I am guilty of fibbing. A wife is not like an open book. She looks and acts differently in different situations. Of course, she deserves all praise, but seven lines to praise her would be gross injustice to her.
However, you attempted a difficult task and succeeded to a limited extent.
I liked the poem especially the last line. Good luck.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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thank you a most humbling review. I appreciate your remarks, but you are right ... a wife is a little bit of everything to her man ... thanks again.
Comment from l.raven
Years ago a wife was mostly a mother. Today the wife goes to work, brings home a pay check and makes babies. They've come along way baby. great poem and the piture speaks for itself.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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Years ago a wife was mostly a mother. Today the wife goes to work, brings home a pay check and makes babies. They've come along way baby. great poem and the piture speaks for itself.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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It's so true isn't it ... but I think even years ago there were many women who really wanted something more and god forbid we should actually have gone for it... oh the gossip over the fence that would be ... thanks for stopping by and your wonderful comments.
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YA think ?
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uh huh I think therefore I almost am I think ... so laughing
Comment from Queenise
I like this style and the wonderful poem you have crafted using wife as the title and the illustration is so right and to the point. Have never tried this style but may later. Best wishes. Queenise
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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I like this style and the wonderful poem you have crafted using wife as the title and the illustration is so right and to the point. Have never tried this style but may later. Best wishes. Queenise
Comment Written 19-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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Thank you Queenise for stopping by and your wonderful review.
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You're welcome. Queenise
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
Very well done response to the prompt.You did a great job describing some of the wonderful aspects of a wife.... We have so many it would be difficult to cover them all,especially in this limited space. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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Very well done response to the prompt.You did a great job describing some of the wonderful aspects of a wife.... We have so many it would be difficult to cover them all,especially in this limited space. Very well done.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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Thank you ... it is my first time with this format. I liked the concise directions and thought it a wonderful contest. Kudos to the creator and thanks for the read and review of my work.
Comment from Denise S
It felt cut and dry, no little edge no little flair, it was just there. But a message was sent, a good one too and the picture said a lot
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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It felt cut and dry, no little edge no little flair, it was just there. But a message was sent, a good one too and the picture said a lot
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011
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yeah I can see your POV however some of us do live this kind of life. Straight, no frills, just living the best we know how and loving as hard as we can...appreciate your great constructive critique. Thanks for stopping by
