Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "If I Lose."memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from LoveLifeKnight
yes lets all hope!!! this is a powerful poem, a dark soul song about losing in more ways than one. it will be a tough vote thats for sure!!!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2011
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yes lets all hope!!! this is a powerful poem, a dark soul song about losing in more ways than one. it will be a tough vote thats for sure!!!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2011
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thank you for the kind review
Comment from c_lucas
I can sense the character's frustrations and anger. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2011
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I can sense the character's frustrations and anger. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2011
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Thanks i was frustrated when I wrote it. Tuff day at work.
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You're welcome, Keirnosobie. Charlie