Stories and Poems for the Holidays
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "To Believe or Not to Believe"Holiday musings.
16 total reviews
Comment from denise.edge
Your story is fun and easy to read. I liked the wording and grammar you used. It sounded like the way a child speaks. You reminded me of my childhood Christmas. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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Your story is fun and easy to read. I liked the wording and grammar you used. It sounded like the way a child speaks. You reminded me of my childhood Christmas. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments.
Comment from marcellawachtel
Really first-rate story - in the voice of a child who is most reluctant to give up believing in Santa Claus. The combination of innocence and intelligence makes this boy's story very appealing.
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Really first-rate story - in the voice of a child who is most reluctant to give up believing in Santa Claus. The combination of innocence and intelligence makes this boy's story very appealing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
May the best of the season come your way,
Comment from songlines
I liked this true story and I still believe in Santa! It is always interesting to see through the eyes of a child and we don't often get the chance. Good luck in the competition.
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I liked this true story and I still believe in Santa! It is always interesting to see through the eyes of a child and we don't often get the chance. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the review and generous stars. I enjoyed your comments.
Comment from sweetsilversong
A wonderful short story.
One I enjoyed immensely.
A child's dilemma, one we have all faced.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes.
SSS
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A wonderful short story.
One I enjoyed immensely.
A child's dilemma, one we have all faced.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Merry Christmas
Comment from adewpearl
what happened to the milk I left out? - add the question mark
I love the grate breaking part - how adorable, and the fact that daddy doesn't even like fruitcake
You tell this extremely well from a child's point of view - and also using age-appropriate grammar :-) Good luck in the contest. Brooke
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what happened to the milk I left out? - add the question mark
I love the grate breaking part - how adorable, and the fact that daddy doesn't even like fruitcake
You tell this extremely well from a child's point of view - and also using age-appropriate grammar :-) Good luck in the contest. Brooke
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much Brooke, I really appreciate the review and nice comemnts.
Smiles,
Comment from Jnetgame
Cute story about believing in Santa. It does sound like a story from the point of view of a child. I didn't see any SPAG. Good luck in the contest.
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Cute story about believing in Santa. It does sound like a story from the point of view of a child. I didn't see any SPAG. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments.