Quietude
Heroic Crown Of Sonnets - 15 interlinked sonnets.84 total reviews
Comment from Soledadpaz
What an amazing effort you have penned. It is remarkable and riveting. I can relate to many of your words of love and contentment. "Contentment comes to those who knew it would."
I love that line.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2010
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What an amazing effort you have penned. It is remarkable and riveting. I can relate to many of your words of love and contentment. "Contentment comes to those who knew it would."
I love that line.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2010
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Ahhh thanks so much poet for reading this effort. I actually enjoyed every minute of those five hours +. LOL. Your review is wonderful. MUAHHHH.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Amazing effort with this writing... I love how you write about quiet and the portals that you have to go through and I feel that anyone could identify with some part of this wonderful poem... It has a good flow. I think you write with emotion and give good description all through your poem.
Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2010
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Amazing effort with this writing... I love how you write about quiet and the portals that you have to go through and I feel that anyone could identify with some part of this wonderful poem... It has a good flow. I think you write with emotion and give good description all through your poem.
Well done!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2010
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Thank you so much Auroraboreal!!!! Awesome words and a great smile you left here. Thank you!!!!
Comment from Jen Gentry
Oh Gungalo if only i had a 6 right now. this peace of art is so beautiful. Sigh... Of course I love it. How could I not. Well done just doesn't quite say enough...
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2010
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Oh Gungalo if only i had a 6 right now. this peace of art is so beautiful. Sigh... Of course I love it. How could I not. Well done just doesn't quite say enough...
Comment Written 01-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2010
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Thanks Christa!!! It's not the points that count so much as the enjoyment someone gets from the read.
Comment from richard7
contemplate escape through the minds eye.
wow this takes reading for sure!
your canvas your painting your color your style description and flow is so well done.
i like the last and 1st sentence fits so nice and takes the reader painter dreamer to the next level of thought and picture to be seen here.
ways I must contend with off and on;
the routine of the day sux sometimes eh!
:-)
wonderful
the length appreciates the time taken to paint a good picture.
thanks i like it.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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contemplate escape through the minds eye.
wow this takes reading for sure!
your canvas your painting your color your style description and flow is so well done.
i like the last and 1st sentence fits so nice and takes the reader painter dreamer to the next level of thought and picture to be seen here.
ways I must contend with off and on;
the routine of the day sux sometimes eh!
:-)
wonderful
the length appreciates the time taken to paint a good picture.
thanks i like it.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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Thank YOU Richard. What wonderful words you left for me and also the smile! MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from b.anderson65
I am breathless! You have accomplished a wonder. It is not easy to do. You have the 14 lines, iambic pentameter (lines with 10 syllables). Some sonnets rhyme schemes are abab, cdcd, efef and gg. I am glad you stuck with the abab scheme. I hope I am right for I tried to read it carefully.
This love sonnet says much. Thanks for writing it. B.anderson
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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I am breathless! You have accomplished a wonder. It is not easy to do. You have the 14 lines, iambic pentameter (lines with 10 syllables). Some sonnets rhyme schemes are abab, cdcd, efef and gg. I am glad you stuck with the abab scheme. I hope I am right for I tried to read it carefully.
This love sonnet says much. Thanks for writing it. B.anderson
Comment Written 28-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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Thank you poet for your wonderful wonderful words here. My heart and soul are in this write ... so now you know me. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from edgey54
Top marks how eloquently announced and to write it in 5hrs. self observation as a canvas which you paint so humble though the vision was demanding on the reader,when you were deep in though so was I well done.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Top marks how eloquently announced and to write it in 5hrs. self observation as a canvas which you paint so humble though the vision was demanding on the reader,when you were deep in though so was I well done.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thanks so much edgey!!! Long write, long read ... long time before another one me thinks. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good day or evening to you Gungalo
I can see peace within your soul and mind when you composed your 15 sonnets. very relaxing to read,
Once I got going I didn't even notice the length.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Good day or evening to you Gungalo
I can see peace within your soul and mind when you composed your 15 sonnets. very relaxing to read,
Once I got going I didn't even notice the length.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Oh that's wonderful for that's how it really felt writing it too. Thank you so very much, Gert!!!
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You are welcome
Take care
Gert
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MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH have a great night Gert!!!
Comment from RebelRose
Quite lengthy but well worth the read. I have never written one of this type but you surely made it look easy. I think the 13th sonnet seemed to fit me the most. I went back and read that one again.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Quite lengthy but well worth the read. I have never written one of this type but you surely made it look easy. I think the 13th sonnet seemed to fit me the most. I went back and read that one again.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Now that is a real compliment, RR!!!! I thank you for reading it and identifying with it too. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from words
Bravo!
You time and effort were well spent.
Such a lovely, peaceful write ... almost a whisper on the wind.
I especially loved your closing lines:In dreams I share and fly in arms of love,
such music sweet in stillness wafts on high;
as through the universe so far above
in open arms that welcome my soft sigh.
Its promise now to me is understood,
contentment comes to those who knew it would.
FYI: Had a bit of a hard time reading part of it ... for some of it the words ran over your profile. Had to highlight them to read them.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Bravo!
You time and effort were well spent.
Such a lovely, peaceful write ... almost a whisper on the wind.
I especially loved your closing lines:In dreams I share and fly in arms of love,
such music sweet in stillness wafts on high;
as through the universe so far above
in open arms that welcome my soft sigh.
Its promise now to me is understood,
contentment comes to those who knew it would.
FYI: Had a bit of a hard time reading part of it ... for some of it the words ran over your profile. Had to highlight them to read them.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Oh no!!! I don't see that here. Will have to check and see why. Thanks .... words!!! Love yer screen name.
Comment from BLACKDYKE
A very long read Gungalo and that's true, but by the time I had read the first sonnet I was hooked. You see I enjoy the classics and to me this reflects the classical write.
An enjoyable read in solitude. Eric
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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A very long read Gungalo and that's true, but by the time I had read the first sonnet I was hooked. You see I enjoy the classics and to me this reflects the classical write.
An enjoyable read in solitude. Eric
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you Blackdyke!!! What wonderful words to come home to tonight. I appreciate you reading it. MUAHHHHHHHHHH.