Quite Revealing
A Lovers Tiff Exposed28 total reviews
Comment from wierdgrace
how often does office romance happen, this is a great you revealed the office characters, I felt like I was one listening in, and so glad so found out the truth, good luck in the contest, and no errors I could see good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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how often does office romance happen, this is a great you revealed the office characters, I felt like I was one listening in, and so glad so found out the truth, good luck in the contest, and no errors I could see good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Grace. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Annmuma
How funny and what a great picture! No spag issues. Should do well in the contest. There are so many really good entries that making a choice is so difficult! Apparently your character also had a difficult time making a choice. ann
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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How funny and what a great picture! No spag issues. Should do well in the contest. There are so many really good entries that making a choice is so difficult! Apparently your character also had a difficult time making a choice. ann
Comment Written 29-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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And from what I can see, he's making a bad one to let her go. Lol. Thanks for your fun review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Did you find the picture then write the story?
I thought it was well done, well written..
Cute, comical, witty...
also probably very true to life..
good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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Did you find the picture then write the story?
I thought it was well done, well written..
Cute, comical, witty...
also probably very true to life..
good luck with the contest
Comment Written 29-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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Lol, I had the picture and was waiting for the opportunity to use it. Thanks for a wonderful review.
Comment from eliz100
This is a good story in 100 words. They say a picture is worth a thousand words and you sure got your message through with the picture.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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This is a good story in 100 words. They say a picture is worth a thousand words and you sure got your message through with the picture.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2010
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Lol, Thank you, Eliz. Yes, it's quite a picture to accompany the story. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Ponder
Hi,
I love the photo you've chosen to go with this little story! I thought your flash was well written and nicely satisfies the contest requirements. I didn't spot any errors, good luck with the contest.
Jules
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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Hi,
I love the photo you've chosen to go with this little story! I thought your flash was well written and nicely satisfies the contest requirements. I didn't spot any errors, good luck with the contest.
Jules
Comment Written 28-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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Thanks, Jules. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
Comment from littlehaven
dirty little secrets are always found out. I like the picture it looks quite appropriate. It does seem the other woman would catch on to being used.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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dirty little secrets are always found out. I like the picture it looks quite appropriate. It does seem the other woman would catch on to being used.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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Well, they say love is blind....so, perhaps she didn' want to see it. - Thanks for a fun review.
Comment from Belinda
I wonder, do you find the picture first or the do you think of the story first? Anyway this is hilarious -- both are. Good 100 word dash for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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I wonder, do you find the picture first or the do you think of the story first? Anyway this is hilarious -- both are. Good 100 word dash for the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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I actually had the picture first. I was waiting to use it with the right story. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Katiesherrill
Great picture to go with the story, but I was sure if the picture was showing what was revealed or if the fact that the office could hear was the revealing part. Either way this was a good entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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Great picture to go with the story, but I was sure if the picture was showing what was revealed or if the fact that the office could hear was the revealing part. Either way this was a good entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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I tried to make it so it was all revealing. The picture just added a rather impressive visual. Thanks for reading.
Comment from MizKat
Your words, in this hundred word dash, fit the picture to a T and vise versa. It's a cute story about falling for a married man. Who is the most stupid?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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Your words, in this hundred word dash, fit the picture to a T and vise versa. It's a cute story about falling for a married man. Who is the most stupid?
Comment Written 28-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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LOL, Good question. I think they both are. Thanks for reading.
Comment from ryanlion
very cheeky and very funny, difficult to make a 100 words entertaining, but you've certainly done it with this one, nice job
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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very cheeky and very funny, difficult to make a 100 words entertaining, but you've certainly done it with this one, nice job
Comment Written 28-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2010
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Thanks, ryan. I'm glad you enjoyed the humor.