Invisible Friend
A childhood friend42 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
A sweet poem about a special childhood friend captured in your words and the picture you chose. I enjoyed your rhymes and sentiment very much.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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A sweet poem about a special childhood friend captured in your words and the picture you chose. I enjoyed your rhymes and sentiment very much.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for taking time to read it and the great rating.
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
I love this piece of poetry. Every child should have a pet. The only note of sadness in this for me is that the puppy is 'invisible'. Otherwise, a glorious piece of writing.
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I love this piece of poetry. Every child should have a pet. The only note of sadness in this for me is that the puppy is 'invisible'. Otherwise, a glorious piece of writing.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 27-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am so happy to find you enjoyed this piece. Yes, every child should have a furry friend. Thank you for your great rating.
Comment from honeytree
A dog can be a mans best friend even more so, a little girl or boy's best best friend.
A most loving picture and cute.I could nurse this precious dog all day.
Wonderful words written here.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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A dog can be a mans best friend even more so, a little girl or boy's best best friend.
A most loving picture and cute.I could nurse this precious dog all day.
Wonderful words written here.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes, the artwork was absolutely perfect and looked exactly like my invisible friend. Thanks for the great rating.
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I loved every word written here Gentle Wind.
Honeytree.
Comment from The Guardian
Very simple, yet so effective. Your word choice paints the picture of the narrator's friend, their special relationships, and the companionship.
Lovely,
Merle
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Very simple, yet so effective. Your word choice paints the picture of the narrator's friend, their special relationships, and the companionship.
Lovely,
Merle
Comment Written 27-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to read and the great rating.
Comment from HalfHoff
OHHHHHHHHH! How precious! Thank YOU for letting us see her too! I just recently got a new puppy myself and - wow -- is there anything better than puppy breath? Great Write! Lea Ann
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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OHHHHHHHHH! How precious! Thank YOU for letting us see her too! I just recently got a new puppy myself and - wow -- is there anything better than puppy breath? Great Write! Lea Ann
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Puppy breath is wonderful! What kind of a puppy is it? I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for the great rating.
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A male yellow lab -- his SHORT story is in my portfolio -- titled "Waiting for Martin".
Comment from Trybuck
The puppy is adorable even if imaginary. I liked the flow, the rhymes and the repeated use of words. I'll have to remember that the next time I try to write a children's poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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The puppy is adorable even if imaginary. I liked the flow, the rhymes and the repeated use of words. I'll have to remember that the next time I try to write a children's poem.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Glad you liked my puppy picture. It looks exactly like my invisible friend. Thanks for taking the time to read and the great rating.
Comment from ArtGal
Awww, I used to have a poodle but eventually gave her away because I developed asthma. I really miss not having pets, I'd even love to have a kitty. I can tell that Peaches is a true friend and she'll snuggle through the night, how sweet is that? I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Awww, I used to have a poodle but eventually gave her away because I developed asthma. I really miss not having pets, I'd even love to have a kitty. I can tell that Peaches is a true friend and she'll snuggle through the night, how sweet is that? I enjoyed!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Try to envision a perfect pet, then you can have an invisible friend! Thank you for reading and the great rating.
Comment from Frances Jean
This is beautiful. You have presented your poem well with a great picture to support it. Lovely descriptions - we all need special friends to help us along in life. Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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This is beautiful. You have presented your poem well with a great picture to support it. Lovely descriptions - we all need special friends to help us along in life. Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. That picture was a perfect image of Peaches. Thank you for the great rating.
Comment from Oatmeal
GentleWind,
A cute little number. All things are moving effectively, nice and full of flashy impressions, well expressed. The arrangement is formatted very well. This is very detailed poem.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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GentleWind,
A cute little number. All things are moving effectively, nice and full of flashy impressions, well expressed. The arrangement is formatted very well. This is very detailed poem.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Thanks for the vote of confidence in this piece. I really hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great rating and yes, you will see me again. I'm back!
Comment from AnnaLinda
GentleWind,
Your poem, "Invisible Friend" is adorable! It has great thoughts all composed in great rhymes! I especially enjoyed this line: "She lies with me as slumber comes,
Licks my hand, and then my thumb"
You have a lovely presentation as well!
SweetLinda
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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GentleWind,
Your poem, "Invisible Friend" is adorable! It has great thoughts all composed in great rhymes! I especially enjoyed this line: "She lies with me as slumber comes,
Licks my hand, and then my thumb"
You have a lovely presentation as well!
SweetLinda
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Thank you for the lovely words you expressed in your review. I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great rating.
