Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

A quick read that has me curious to there one time love affair or something else, what has he done to need this lawyer and what will happen next. Good job at leaving the reader wanting more.

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Jmdg

I have posted 5 chapters and hope that you will continue reading. I appreciate all comments and ideas of improving the story. Thanks again Carol

Comment from Queenise

Excellent

Thanks for referring me to this chapter. I had seen the picture but had not read it. It is a great one too. Good imagery and now I understand what you meant about background. This is so true to life. Love the action and drama and the intensity of this chapter. Would refer to others. Keep on with your great writing. Queenise

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Queenise

I am glad that you went back to read it because it had a lot of information in it that is needed to know why they are like fire and water. Thanks for the review. Carol

reply by Queenise on 09-Oct-2009

You're welcome my friend. I'm glad too. Queenise

Comment from Jnetgame

Excellent

Another great chapter. The dialogue flows well, the imagery is excellent and this held my attention to the end. Keep up the great work.
Jenny

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Jenny

Thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it. Carol

Comment from MJMuraco

Excellent

You used great descriptive imagery in this work. I can picture Max trying to intimate his princess lawyer and I'm glad she stayed strong.

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MJ

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I have 3-4-and 5 posted too. I anxious to see what is thought of the next few chapters. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from Blaidd Drwg

Excellent

Carole, you have a knack for creating three-dimensional, very believable characters. The interchange between these two is electric, high-voltage electric. The tension is brilliantly portrayed. Great chapter; great addition to your novella.

John

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John

Thank you so much for the encouraging words. I hope you enjoy the rest as well. I have posted 3-4-and 5. A lot of sizzle in them. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from Phil Kitom

Excellent

Well we are certainly underway with this
story now and I am looking forward to what
surprises you have in store for your readers
Awaiting next chapter Carol...

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Phil

Thanks so much for the review. I have posted 3-4-and 5. I think you will enjoy them. At least I hope so!!! Smiles, Carol

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Begin Again,
let me say you have a good story going here.
I like the clever dialogue and the very quick response to some of the things that Riley had to say to
( I believe you are referring to Max)

Gert

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Gert

I am pleased that you are enjoying the tension between the two - Reilly and Max. I hoped it would sound realistic. Thanks for the review. I have posted 3 - 4 and 5 if you care to continue. Thanks again. Carol

reply by Gert sherwood on 09-Oct-2009

You are welcome Carol
Gert

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Begin Again,

I guess Reilly really did set down the rules! I like the interaction you have created between the two characters.
" If you're looking for your next conquest, it's not here. Do you understand?"

I liked your chapter two Begin Again!

SweetLinda

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Linda

The fun is just beginning and the tension is building for sure. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from FredCollingwood

Excellent

Great story. You're really putting them out lately. that's fine by me. I enjoy reading your work. Well done, here.

Fred

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Fred

Thanks so much for the compliment. I appreciate it when I write something and someone really enjoys the story not just the money. I have posted Chapters 3 - 4 and 5. Look forward to your response. Smiles, Carol

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Carol, this is so good,
I'm hooked...can't wait
to read more. Your dialogues
and scene are expertly crafted
making for a smooth unencumbered
read. Your characters are
realistic and very believeable.
no nits. Lora

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Lora

Thanks for enjoying this chapter. I hope to publish so I appreciate knowing how the story affects you and what seems out of whack. Thanks again. Smiles, Carol