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an ottava rima12 total reviews
Comment from babylonia
all of the words are used and in such a creative way. poor girl. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. sad but true, it happens more than we know.
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009
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all of the words are used and in such a creative way. poor girl. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. sad but true, it happens more than we know.
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009
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Your last statement is truer than I want to believe. But someone had to educate people about what happens to the oppressed and the marginalized. Thanks for a good review.
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yes they do although many will turn their heads, pretending not to understand. many others won't. good job.
love,
barbara
Comment from pilarblue
I like the unique approach you took with this piece. I'm definitely impressed, I have'nt mastered the iambic meter yet, and yours is outstanding. Great work. :)
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009
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I like the unique approach you took with this piece. I'm definitely impressed, I have'nt mastered the iambic meter yet, and yours is outstanding. Great work. :)
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009
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Mine actually is a little off, but sometimes that can't be help. Occasionally the emphasis falls on "a", which pushes the meter. Meter actually is my weak point, so I have to work on it every day. Thanks for a good review.