Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Hi PUPA,
I know you have written this as a contest entry using their words, but I find there to be a lot of thought in your poem. As far as I'm concerned your poem sends a powerful message that all need to read. At times we all get caught up in those trappings and forget the important things in life. Excellent rhyme and flow with an important lesson. Can't get much better than this. Good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Hi dear Friend.
It is the first time I try using certain words in a poem. Thanks for all your support.
Love
Pupa

Comment from laurelp

Excellent

Nicely done. This piece was short and too the point. I found no errors as I read it out loud. The poem told its tale and it was good.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Thanks, glad you liked it.
Love
Pupa

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

Lucifer WAS God's most beautiful angel. And indeed not all beautiful packages are what they seem. Excellent analogy in this contest entry. Best of luck to you. Blessings always, Linda

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Thanks Linda, appreciate your kind comments.
Love
Pupa

Comment from skye

Excellent

This is a very dark poem, using the required words effectively. Your poem is well crafted, with dark and edgy feelings and images. I like the idea of trapped by the devil's wiles...
Great artwork.
Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Thanks skye, glad you liked my poem.
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Pupa

Comment from Twomoon

Excellent

pupa, goodmorning, your poetry with coffee hit the spot. This one felt deep and full of mystery. I loved the imagery and the some eyes were blinded by the shine and did not know what went wrong, how true is that statement. a powerful verse. have a great day, much love twomoon

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Thanks again Twomoon, I allways appreciate your reviews.
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Pupa

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Great use of words -- warning of the temptations all around. And the real value of a fool's gold. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Thanks Jean Lutz, so glad you liked it.
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Pupa

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Very interesting take on the contest. Well presented with artwork choice and strong rhythm and flow in the stanzas. Good rhyming.

No nits or spag.

Best of luck, PUPA

Warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Thanks Rama Devi, it is the first time enter that kind of contest with certain words.
Love
Pupa

Comment from pilarblue

Excellent

Hello Pupa, I was sure that I had rated yours already, but it didn't show it. Anyhow, outstanding work my friend. Best of luck. :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

Pilar, thanks for your kind review.
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Pupa

Comment from becky7777

Excellent

oh so dark and great. I love dark poem and this is a really well written one. like the way you used the words. good luck in the contest.
Becky

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

I believe this is my first and maybe last dark poem I have ever written Becky LOL. Thanks for your support.
Love
Pupa

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

pupa,
looks like you did an excellent job using all of these words. made me smile. made me giggle. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2009

Thanks again dear friend.
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Pupa

reply by babylonia on 29-Apr-2009

pupa,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara