CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Rottie
Hoe true! Your poem reminds me of the Simon and Garfunkel song "A Bridge Over Trouble Waters" I could hear it play behind your short POEM.
Nicely Done
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Hoe true! Your poem reminds me of the Simon and Garfunkel song "A Bridge Over Trouble Waters" I could hear it play behind your short POEM.
Nicely Done
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
Comment from moosegal
Of all the poetry styles and contests, this seems to be the hardest. You did a great job. It left me with hope. Given that there was loss involved, this could have become a real downer. But you nailed it, especially with the picture and your smiling face in the bio. With all that, you conveyed a real feeling of "it's gonna be ok, honestly" :)
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Of all the poetry styles and contests, this seems to be the hardest. You did a great job. It left me with hope. Given that there was loss involved, this could have become a real downer. But you nailed it, especially with the picture and your smiling face in the bio. With all that, you conveyed a real feeling of "it's gonna be ok, honestly" :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
Comment from Jarlsbane
A little too short for my tastes.. not that I think good poetry has to be long by any means... this seems a little "chinese fortune cookie-ish".. no offense... just my take -jarls
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A little too short for my tastes.. not that I think good poetry has to be long by any means... this seems a little "chinese fortune cookie-ish".. no offense... just my take -jarls
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
Comment from womanwriter
Girl, off all the poets on this site - I learn more from you than anyone. This time a new way of writing - with an 'internal' rhyme.
Well done, and thank you for the lesson.
Sincerely,
womanwriter
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Girl, off all the poets on this site - I learn more from you than anyone. This time a new way of writing - with an 'internal' rhyme.
Well done, and thank you for the lesson.
Sincerely,
womanwriter
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from honeytree
When something has been
very sad within one's life.
There can be a bridge to cross.
that God gives to us to cross.
"Hope arrives after loss
A bridge for lives to cross"
Brilliant words and full of hope to cross that bridge.
Honeytree
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When something has been
very sad within one's life.
There can be a bridge to cross.
that God gives to us to cross.
"Hope arrives after loss
A bridge for lives to cross"
Brilliant words and full of hope to cross that bridge.
Honeytree
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a sweet little Essence poem, Sue. You said a lot in just those few allowed syllables. Good luck in the contest.
Sally
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This is a sweet little Essence poem, Sue. You said a lot in just those few allowed syllables. Good luck in the contest.
Sally
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from scobbydoo
Quite different then anything I have seen or read before, but very good.A really good choice in the bold abstract photograph.
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Quite different then anything I have seen or read before, but very good.A really good choice in the bold abstract photograph.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from c_lucas
It is a very unique idea that our lives are connected by metaphysical bridges. Very good flow of words making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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It is a very unique idea that our lives are connected by metaphysical bridges. Very good flow of words making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
So much can be said even in such a short space. The personification of Hope makes the poem a very personal one. The metaphor in the second line is original and very appropriate for the message.
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So much can be said even in such a short space. The personification of Hope makes the poem a very personal one. The metaphor in the second line is original and very appropriate for the message.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from malachi1206
I see several writers trying this I haven't tried this yet but it looks to be catching on very nicely done and an excellent write malachi1206
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I see several writers trying this I haven't tried this yet but it looks to be catching on very nicely done and an excellent write malachi1206
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009