CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Poetic Friend
Sue, in its brevity your poem captured the essence of fate.
Sometimes fate opearates as instinct -- usually never lead us wrong.
That last line provides profoundity.
It's always a pleasure to read your poetry.
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Sue, in its brevity your poem captured the essence of fate.
Sometimes fate opearates as instinct -- usually never lead us wrong.
That last line provides profoundity.
It's always a pleasure to read your poetry.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is a well-written Clarity Pyramid poem and you have made very good use of your well-chosen words.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is a well-written Clarity Pyramid poem and you have made very good use of your well-chosen words.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
i wish I were the same shape as the geezer in the picture, as I could have all sorts of fun with myself. LMAO!
Your last line is a perfect ironic conclusion to the 'wonderful' journey we call life.
Intelligent and interesting write. Love, Ray xx
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Hi, Sue
i wish I were the same shape as the geezer in the picture, as I could have all sorts of fun with myself. LMAO!
Your last line is a perfect ironic conclusion to the 'wonderful' journey we call life.
Intelligent and interesting write. Love, Ray xx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello there poet and hope you are well. I loved this and one day might try my hand at it. You followed the rules and provided a great message as well, easy to read and understand. Loyd
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Hello there poet and hope you are well. I loved this and one day might try my hand at it. You followed the rules and provided a great message as well, easy to read and understand. Loyd
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I like the picture ,Rich amazing imagery in this poem, I love the story that this poem tell. and its inward thinking, Nice write and I was lost in thought about some words here,for a minute but after awhile. I love what i found, i like the poetry of it. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
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I like the picture ,Rich amazing imagery in this poem, I love the story that this poem tell. and its inward thinking, Nice write and I was lost in thought about some words here,for a minute but after awhile. I love what i found, i like the poetry of it. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
As usual, you take the criteria and create something splendid and deeply profound! I love this. I find myself wondering, where do you get all your wisdom? No faults, nothing to criticise at all.
Warmest wishes
Kat
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As usual, you take the criteria and create something splendid and deeply profound! I love this. I find myself wondering, where do you get all your wisdom? No faults, nothing to criticise at all.
Warmest wishes
Kat
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from jeslaf
Tomorrow is promised to no one, life ain't always a bowl of cherries, I never promised you a rose garden, time and chance happen to them all...and now you have weighed in with your words on one of the mysteries of life, and done it well. :)
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Tomorrow is promised to no one, life ain't always a bowl of cherries, I never promised you a rose garden, time and chance happen to them all...and now you have weighed in with your words on one of the mysteries of life, and done it well. :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
I like your last sentence. Your clarity poem is nicely written and your message is wonderfully presented. I found no errors while reading this. Good luck in the contest.
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I like your last sentence. Your clarity poem is nicely written and your message is wonderfully presented. I found no errors while reading this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Rottie
Those pyramid poems can be tricky. I haven't try one because with my luck all the works I built would tumble down on my head like playing Jenga! nicely written both in word and in the visual!
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Those pyramid poems can be tricky. I haven't try one because with my luck all the works I built would tumble down on my head like playing Jenga! nicely written both in word and in the visual!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from tammipratt
Again, I think you have written a great poem here. I think the artwork is fabulous for this piece and goes very well. Well done.
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Again, I think you have written a great poem here. I think the artwork is fabulous for this piece and goes very well. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009