CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Consanguinity"A collection of poetry
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Comment from adewpearl
You have certainly followed the rules of this brand new form
Your words are all a good fit to the dictionary word
Compared to most of your poems, this does nothing for me
Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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You have certainly followed the rules of this brand new form
Your words are all a good fit to the dictionary word
Compared to most of your poems, this does nothing for me
Brooke
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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In these contests, I do love to stretch my ability to hone down to the minimum use of words. Has always helped me get better in writing. And I enjoy the exercise to see the outcome. Thanks for your very honest review, Sue
Comment from JoAnna Lee
Very well done within the confines of the rules. The shape was formed and you made quite a statement. Good Luck
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
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Very well done within the confines of the rules. The shape was formed and you made quite a statement. Good Luck
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
A perfect teacup. Perfect words. Lovely sentiments. It looks great on the page too. You did a geat job.
Sincerely
Delora
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A perfect teacup. Perfect words. Lovely sentiments. It looks great on the page too. You did a geat job.
Sincerely
Delora
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
Interesting style to work with. I like how it follows certain rules and also makes a distinctive shape. I think you picked the perfect subject for this style. Tea can represent the close bonds shared by those that participate in "tea time" with friends and family. :) Great style and form. Thanks for sharing!
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Interesting style to work with. I like how it follows certain rules and also makes a distinctive shape. I think you picked the perfect subject for this style. Tea can represent the close bonds shared by those that participate in "tea time" with friends and family. :) Great style and form. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Insane Poet
Well done again Sue. Must admit I had to look up consanguinity in the dictionary first! :)
A great choice of words for this poem. I can see how the words form a tree as they link together from one line to the next.
The choice of art is also very apparent with your family tree link.
Im a big family guy, so the closing line is very close to my heart.
Good luck in the competition Sue. Hopefully I can give you a run for your money in this one. :)
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Well done again Sue. Must admit I had to look up consanguinity in the dictionary first! :)
A great choice of words for this poem. I can see how the words form a tree as they link together from one line to the next.
The choice of art is also very apparent with your family tree link.
Im a big family guy, so the closing line is very close to my heart.
Good luck in the competition Sue. Hopefully I can give you a run for your money in this one. :)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from joan marie
This is an interesting format. I am stuck I think with rhyming couplets. I seem to think in them. Well we all have our burdens. You must have a wonderful relationship with your family to inspire this one. joan marie
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This is an interesting format. I am stuck I think with rhyming couplets. I seem to think in them. Well we all have our burdens. You must have a wonderful relationship with your family to inspire this one. joan marie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from amada
Reading the rules of the contest, this is a very clever style and we did a wonderful work on it. I can see your dedication in presenting the best.
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Reading the rules of the contest, this is a very clever style and we did a wonderful work on it. I can see your dedication in presenting the best.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Just2Write
Great word! It was new to me, so this was a double treat. Your poem worked beautifully, and you described it so well. Good luck in the contest! Rose.
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Great word! It was new to me, so this was a double treat. Your poem worked beautifully, and you described it so well. Good luck in the contest! Rose.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from rmdelta
wow, what a writing. 'Teacup Dictionary?' I think you did a very good job with this, Sue. It has to be in the shape of a 'teacup?' I'm lost there because I have no idea what a teacup looks like. Is it like a coffeecup? I've come to the conclusion that most of this stuff is the result of somebody with too much time on their hands. lol
Good luck in the contest, my dear friend.
REggie
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wow, what a writing. 'Teacup Dictionary?' I think you did a very good job with this, Sue. It has to be in the shape of a 'teacup?' I'm lost there because I have no idea what a teacup looks like. Is it like a coffeecup? I've come to the conclusion that most of this stuff is the result of somebody with too much time on their hands. lol
Good luck in the contest, my dear friend.
REggie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
Comment from Judian James
I love learning something new and this was one of those times. Had you ever seen the word before this contest or did you go looking for something different? well done
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I love learning something new and this was one of those times. Had you ever seen the word before this contest or did you go looking for something different? well done
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009