CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Break This Heart"A collection of poetry
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Comment from jlsavell
sixteezkid, when I read your poetry, it is so very hard for me to believe that last September or so was your first attempt at writing. You write with so much emotion, so much passion and so much elegance. This poem clearly demonstrates all the above..well done..jlsavell
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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sixteezkid, when I read your poetry, it is so very hard for me to believe that last September or so was your first attempt at writing. You write with so much emotion, so much passion and so much elegance. This poem clearly demonstrates all the above..well done..jlsavell
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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This is about the best review one can receive. I didn't know I could write a word just a few months ago. And thanks to this forum, and from so many wonderful people who have helped me learn, I've found that I can just 'let it rip' and try to write as honestly as I can. An amazing feeling. Would be worthless without a reader, though. Your compliments go straight to my heart. Thank you so much. With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Annelisa
Youu express the need to feel so vividly and eloquently in this beautiful poem. I love the third stanza. It imagery is just stunning. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Youu express the need to feel so vividly and eloquently in this beautiful poem. I love the third stanza. It imagery is just stunning. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Annelisa, Your comments and compliments mean so much. And thank you for your great review. With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from oledihard
THERE'S A LOT OF FEELING IN THIS WORK YOU CAN JUST ABOUT HEAR IT. YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB OF EXPRESSING WHAT IS IN YOUR HEART. HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK IN THE FUTURE.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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THERE'S A LOT OF FEELING IN THIS WORK YOU CAN JUST ABOUT HEAR IT. YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB OF EXPRESSING WHAT IS IN YOUR HEART. HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK IN THE FUTURE.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Your comments and compliments mean more than you know. Thank you for this great review. With my regards, Sue
Comment from Insane Poet
Another masterpiece from you Sue. This is a sad story really but there are a lot of lonely souls in this world. I am just glad I'm not one of them. :) I don't think my children would ever allow me to be a lonely old man.
Somehow I don't think you are writing this from experience Sue? :)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Another masterpiece from you Sue. This is a sad story really but there are a lot of lonely souls in this world. I am just glad I'm not one of them. :) I don't think my children would ever allow me to be a lonely old man.
Somehow I don't think you are writing this from experience Sue? :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Then you are one of the richest men in the world.... To know your children would always be there for you, is what life is all about. So happy for you. Your compliments on this poem are so much appreciated. With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from fayesh
I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and the theme that in order to know life, you need to feel, even if to feel means disappointment or loss of love. Better to feel than to be numb.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and the theme that in order to know life, you need to feel, even if to feel means disappointment or loss of love. Better to feel than to be numb.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Fayesh, yes, sometimes with over-stresses in life, we can go in a numb mode. Not where any of us want to be. Thanks so much for your close read and very generous review. With regards, Sue
Comment from tammipratt
A good short read with this poem. I particularly liked the last line - I thought this quite powerful and it brought understanding to me of the meaning in your words to this point:
Break my heart to let me know
There's something left to feel
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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A good short read with this poem. I particularly liked the last line - I thought this quite powerful and it brought understanding to me of the meaning in your words to this point:
Break my heart to let me know
There's something left to feel
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Yes, we humans need to have our sensory system working in some capacity. To feel numb is the worst. Thank you so much for your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from dianadz
Wow, I love this poem. You depicted the emotion of lost love just right, not overspill. I especially like the ending,"Soften up this calloused soul
Before it turns to steel
Break my heart to let me know
There's something left to feel "
Great work.-Diana
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Wow, I love this poem. You depicted the emotion of lost love just right, not overspill. I especially like the ending,"Soften up this calloused soul
Before it turns to steel
Break my heart to let me know
There's something left to feel "
Great work.-Diana
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
Comment from lkatka
I like the rhyme and feel of this poem. I love the message it gives to the audience. I enjoy your poetry a lot. I think this is one of the best.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I like the rhyme and feel of this poem. I love the message it gives to the audience. I enjoy your poetry a lot. I think this is one of the best.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Ikatka, your most generous compliments go right to my heart. And to give it your highest review means more than you know. With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue...this is a wonderful poem. I'll bet many people have felt just like this poem outlines. I live alone but never feel alone and I know I am lucky in that respect. I feel the pathos and pain inside the lines of this poem. You did an excellent job of writing this....blessings....chey
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Hi Sue...this is a wonderful poem. I'll bet many people have felt just like this poem outlines. I live alone but never feel alone and I know I am lucky in that respect. I feel the pathos and pain inside the lines of this poem. You did an excellent job of writing this....blessings....chey
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009
Comment from volunteer angel
I feel the sorrow in this poem. Sometimes life brings us to that point and we want to feel alive again. "Color me with laughter's song" is a wonderful way to start feeling again. Great job on those feeling words in this poem. V.A.
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I feel the sorrow in this poem. Sometimes life brings us to that point and we want to feel alive again. "Color me with laughter's song" is a wonderful way to start feeling again. Great job on those feeling words in this poem. V.A.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2009