CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Transcended"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ....
You have made a very profound statement in this short work of yours and, with your Notes about the picture you have chosen, all round you have provided us with an interesting piece of writing.
Thank you for sharing this with us. Of course, there is nothing to suggest changing.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ....
You have made a very profound statement in this short work of yours and, with your Notes about the picture you have chosen, all round you have provided us with an interesting piece of writing.
Thank you for sharing this with us. Of course, there is nothing to suggest changing.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from mark tree
Sixteezkid very well written Tetractys, opinions on humankind and art may differ, but you stated you case well. Good luck in the contest.
marcus....
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Sixteezkid very well written Tetractys, opinions on humankind and art may differ, but you stated you case well. Good luck in the contest.
marcus....
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Hi Marcus, thanks very much for your review. Always appreciated! Sue
Comment from Jack Burbank
Why not six stars? I was never into poetry, but get so much of it on this site, I'm reading it all the time. This entry makes me smile, makes me think and makes me appreciate poetry a little more. Thanks. JB
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Why not six stars? I was never into poetry, but get so much of it on this site, I'm reading it all the time. This entry makes me smile, makes me think and makes me appreciate poetry a little more. Thanks. JB
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
Sue, you have done it again! How difficult it is to define anything created by people but which actually serves to prove our existence and in turn defines us. (I think you have a philosophical mind like mine.)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Sue, you have done it again! How difficult it is to define anything created by people but which actually serves to prove our existence and in turn defines us. (I think you have a philosophical mind like mine.)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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You have PERFECTLY summed up everything I have intended to say. I LOVE IT!! After reviewing each other for awhile now, it is obvious that we "get" each other. Very cool. Sue
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Thanks. It's hard to find people I can relate to!
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Always been the same for me. Don't know what it is....
Comment from fictionwriter
This poem truly describes how I feel about art. I can enjoy the beautiful scenes of nature, but some of the other stuff I just don't get. I guess that my mind just doesn't work that way. Great poem.
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This poem truly describes how I feel about art. I can enjoy the beautiful scenes of nature, but some of the other stuff I just don't get. I guess that my mind just doesn't work that way. Great poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from bard owl
I think that our yearning for immortality evolves in art. It is, as you say, something that defines our very being, but is illusive when we try to define the mysterious gift that is art. Excellently thought-provoking. Blessings, Linda
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I think that our yearning for immortality evolves in art. It is, as you say, something that defines our very being, but is illusive when we try to define the mysterious gift that is art. Excellently thought-provoking. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from bkrighter
Your Tetractys is very thought-provoking. I am not sure yet whether I agree with your statement, but it is worth pondering. It is good to have something that requires deep thought in the morning; it sort of gets the engine going and warmed up (it is 5 degrees Fahrenheit outside my window as I type this). Thank you. And good luck.
Steve
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Your Tetractys is very thought-provoking. I am not sure yet whether I agree with your statement, but it is worth pondering. It is good to have something that requires deep thought in the morning; it sort of gets the engine going and warmed up (it is 5 degrees Fahrenheit outside my window as I type this). Thank you. And good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from RapturedHeart
Wow, very well put. Defining the arts would be like trying to scoop out the ocean with a spoon - and, even if you could, what would you do with it? Very well said in so few words. All the best in the contest,
Heather
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Wow, very well put. Defining the arts would be like trying to scoop out the ocean with a spoon - and, even if you could, what would you do with it? Very well said in so few words. All the best in the contest,
Heather
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from K-Patrick
I am voting on the Tetractys Contest and reading all the poems. There are quite a few so, I won't be doing a detailed review, but I think your poem truly does indicate the reviewer's perspective.
'To have great poets there must be great audiences too.' ~ ~ Walt Whitman
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I am voting on the Tetractys Contest and reading all the poems. There are quite a few so, I won't be doing a detailed review, but I think your poem truly does indicate the reviewer's perspective.
'To have great poets there must be great audiences too.' ~ ~ Walt Whitman
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
excellent choice of artwork on this one; I love your work and the author notes too for the wise and rich history.
Philosophy is the genre here; well done; strong contest entry; best wishes in the voting booth!
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excellent choice of artwork on this one; I love your work and the author notes too for the wise and rich history.
Philosophy is the genre here; well done; strong contest entry; best wishes in the voting booth!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009