When We Were Once Five
Contest Entry: Children's Poem37 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello MRs. Kt,
how interesting you took some of the great fairy tales children love yes suppose children went to bed without a fairy tales they wouldn't have fun with their imaginations
( I know it sounds weird)but this is the way I think
Gert
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Hello MRs. Kt,
how interesting you took some of the great fairy tales children love yes suppose children went to bed without a fairy tales they wouldn't have fun with their imaginations
( I know it sounds weird)but this is the way I think
Gert
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from Mischief's Momma
This is a very charming poem Mrs. KT.
To answer your questions, I am sure life would have been fine, but nowhere near as much fun :)
I see no spags, good luck in the contest!
MM
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This is a very charming poem Mrs. KT.
To answer your questions, I am sure life would have been fine, but nowhere near as much fun :)
I see no spags, good luck in the contest!
MM
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from tteach
You do an amazing job linking together all the nursery rhymes...and your poem has a wonderful rhyme and meter to boot! There is a marvelous sense of humor. What is most important, is that I can see this illustrated as a children's book.
well done
terry
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You do an amazing job linking together all the nursery rhymes...and your poem has a wonderful rhyme and meter to boot! There is a marvelous sense of humor. What is most important, is that I can see this illustrated as a children's book.
well done
terry
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from jlsavell
Mrs. KT, this is a delightful read with excellent musings. This is certainly a great contender in childrens poem contest. One of the best.well done.really enjoyed..jlsavell
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Mrs. KT, this is a delightful read with excellent musings. This is certainly a great contender in childrens poem contest. One of the best.well done.really enjoyed..jlsavell
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from wierdgrace
Mrs. Kt this is wonderful, and excellent, and suppose is write, what a great contest, and you have a great entry for it, found no errors or revisions and I wish yo so much luck.
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Mrs. Kt this is wonderful, and excellent, and suppose is write, what a great contest, and you have a great entry for it, found no errors or revisions and I wish yo so much luck.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I like this - has a smooth flow to
it and is light-hearted and fun...
a pleasure to review.
Suppose there was no Man in the Moon
Or no little Dish ran away with the Spoon
Suppose there was no Man in the Moon
or little dish that ran away with the spoon
Just a thought!
Regards,
Margaret.
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I like this - has a smooth flow to
it and is light-hearted and fun...
a pleasure to review.
Suppose there was no Man in the Moon
Or no little Dish ran away with the Spoon
Suppose there was no Man in the Moon
or little dish that ran away with the spoon
Just a thought!
Regards,
Margaret.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from P1
a really lovely poem which i would imagine
kids will really enjoy. great nusery rhyme
imagery and fit the rules of the contest
perfectly. pleasure to read and review
hugs lynda.
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a really lovely poem which i would imagine
kids will really enjoy. great nusery rhyme
imagery and fit the rules of the contest
perfectly. pleasure to read and review
hugs lynda.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
I loved this poem, the words inspired by the fairy tales and nursery rhymes that we all loved as children. You tied it all together in such a fun and imaginative way. My only negative comment is that, while I enjoyed it immensely, I really can't see myself reading it to one of my grandchildren. It seems more a piece to bring memories of those great times back to grownups than a work for kids, IMO. Still, it's a fun little read and I loved the picture you chose to go with it.
Great work - sherry
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
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I loved this poem, the words inspired by the fairy tales and nursery rhymes that we all loved as children. You tied it all together in such a fun and imaginative way. My only negative comment is that, while I enjoyed it immensely, I really can't see myself reading it to one of my grandchildren. It seems more a piece to bring memories of those great times back to grownups than a work for kids, IMO. Still, it's a fun little read and I loved the picture you chose to go with it.
Great work - sherry
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
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Hi sherry! So pleased you stopped by and enjoyed your visit. Thank you for your kind review! diane
Comment from Judian James
Good morning. This is such a sweet, fun contest. I've really enjoyed following the entries. "Suppose we never heard of Fairy Dust How would Dreaming have become a must?"
I loved it Diane!! Your book is being enjoyed each night as I read a passage before sleep!!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
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Good morning. This is such a sweet, fun contest. I've really enjoyed following the entries. "Suppose we never heard of Fairy Dust How would Dreaming have become a must?"
I loved it Diane!! Your book is being enjoyed each night as I read a passage before sleep!!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
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Hello Friend! You are up early this morning! So pleased you enjoyed! I just added a line about Horton and Whoville as I had only one citation for Dr. Seuss! (Thought of the line as I was driving into school this morning!) Take Care! And thank you for the kind review! diane
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I start every day at 4am. My morning walks that I so often write about take place from 4:30-5:30am!! I do most of my reviewing on FS before 8am rolls around!!
Comment from jshep
Very fun read, Mrs. K,and lots of supposes for a child to think about. The flow was delightful as were the nursery rhyme characters you wove into this poem. No changes to recommend. You should do a follow up poem with the answers to the questions. That would be fun to read also. Great job and good luck in contest. Joyce
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Very fun read, Mrs. K,and lots of supposes for a child to think about. The flow was delightful as were the nursery rhyme characters you wove into this poem. No changes to recommend. You should do a follow up poem with the answers to the questions. That would be fun to read also. Great job and good luck in contest. Joyce
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
