CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 86 "In Song or Silence"A collection of poetry
47 total reviews
Comment from Gemma Perkins
the way youve written about this man mkes it clear that he means a lot to you and lights up your life. the rhyme and metre flow naturally and help to give the image depth.
and i especially like the line 'in song or silence', it reminds me of wedding vows, always looking at both sides of something and saying you'll love then either way
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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the way youve written about this man mkes it clear that he means a lot to you and lights up your life. the rhyme and metre flow naturally and help to give the image depth.
and i especially like the line 'in song or silence', it reminds me of wedding vows, always looking at both sides of something and saying you'll love then either way
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Gemma, yes, he does mean a lot. I never looked at it that way: the wedding vows. Very nice! Thank you for your very kind review and lovely compliments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from honeytree
I loved everyword written here and your art work was superb.
A very close connection you have with your muse. Your words written were very descriptive and beautiful. Your words were words of truth, love and silence.
I loved every word.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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I loved everyword written here and your art work was superb.
A very close connection you have with your muse. Your words written were very descriptive and beautiful. Your words were words of truth, love and silence.
I loved every word.
Honeytree
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Hi Honeytree! Thank you for this very kind review and compliments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Adam Smith
This one is a nice portrait and a expression of your gratitude/love for your muse. It's and ode and an homage. I think the meter was very good and the rhymes creative. When I reviewed just the end words of each line going down, I found not a mundane word in the bunch. That's a sure sign that care and skill were applied. Adam
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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This one is a nice portrait and a expression of your gratitude/love for your muse. It's and ode and an homage. I think the meter was very good and the rhymes creative. When I reviewed just the end words of each line going down, I found not a mundane word in the bunch. That's a sure sign that care and skill were applied. Adam
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Adam, I'm so glad you enjoyed this sonnet. I thank you for your very generous review and most kind compliments! Always appreciated :-)) Sue
Comment from jaeladarling
Another beautiful poem. You've got talent, girl! I love the bittersweet tone here. The photo is perfect for it, too. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Another beautiful poem. You've got talent, girl! I love the bittersweet tone here. The photo is perfect for it, too. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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jaeladarling, I'm very glad you enjoyed this sonnet. And I thank you for your very kind review and compliments! Much appreciated...Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
What a beautiful poem, my friend. Great contest entry as well and you should do very nicely with it. Your descriptives are excellent and the poem reads quite smoothly. Well done and good luck, Sue.
Reggie
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Sue,
What a beautiful poem, my friend. Great contest entry as well and you should do very nicely with it. Your descriptives are excellent and the poem reads quite smoothly. Well done and good luck, Sue.
Reggie
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Hi Reggie, so glad you enjoyed this sonnet. I thank you for your lovely review and kind compliments. Always, Sue
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
very nicely written and I don't have anything to complain about...
well that isn't true...
I have to complain about filling up this box with nonsense now because the review police says I didn't write enough... lmbo
that should do it,lets try again
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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very nicely written and I don't have anything to complain about...
well that isn't true...
I have to complain about filling up this box with nonsense now because the review police says I didn't write enough... lmbo
that should do it,lets try again
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Ha! So, at least you found some words to fill in! I've done the same! Glad you enjoyed my sonnet. Thank you for this very kind review. :-)) Sue
Comment from EKPoet
i thought this was a great sonnet, it read really beautifully, with great flow, and nice upbeat, uplifting tone to the language, the rhyme scheme and meter all seemed to fit perfectly together. the language was quite elegant, yet contemporary, which yielded a great effect of being relevent and timeless at the same time, much like love itself. EKPoet
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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i thought this was a great sonnet, it read really beautifully, with great flow, and nice upbeat, uplifting tone to the language, the rhyme scheme and meter all seemed to fit perfectly together. the language was quite elegant, yet contemporary, which yielded a great effect of being relevent and timeless at the same time, much like love itself. EKPoet
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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EKPoet, so glad you enjoyed this sonnet. Thank you for your very kind review and lovely compliments! Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from shimmeringlights
This is beautiful. I commend your attempt at writing a sonnet, as I have tried but it just does not want to come out that way. Great meter, flow, and rhyme.
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This is beautiful. I commend your attempt at writing a sonnet, as I have tried but it just does not want to come out that way. Great meter, flow, and rhyme.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
Comment from Jewell McChesney
You speak in song, in longing tones, a plea
To music written, solely ours to share.
With voices coupled, sharing harmony
A chorus singing softly as in prayer
Wow, I love this and feel you've dipped into the same ink well I have. This is a gorgeous piece of finely written verse. Not only is the poem lovely but so are you. Your new photo is beautiful. Thanks for sharing!
You have a gift.
Jj
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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You speak in song, in longing tones, a plea
To music written, solely ours to share.
With voices coupled, sharing harmony
A chorus singing softly as in prayer
Wow, I love this and feel you've dipped into the same ink well I have. This is a gorgeous piece of finely written verse. Not only is the poem lovely but so are you. Your new photo is beautiful. Thanks for sharing!
You have a gift.
Jj
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Your very kind compliments are so encouraging. I'm so glad you enjoyed this sonnet. Thank you for your great review! Always appreciated, :-)) Sue
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue....I love sonnets and this one is excellent. It is very apt to write about your muse in the form of a sonnet. I think they are the purest form of all poetry forms. A good story line and impeccable rhyme makes this a pleasure to read. Good luck in the voting booth...blessings....chey
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Hi Sue....I love sonnets and this one is excellent. It is very apt to write about your muse in the form of a sonnet. I think they are the purest form of all poetry forms. A good story line and impeccable rhyme makes this a pleasure to read. Good luck in the voting booth...blessings....chey
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009