CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from dportwood
You did a good job with this contest entry. The torn picture - the destruction of a family - what saddness we bring upon ourselves, and the children suffer the most.
Duane
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You did a good job with this contest entry. The torn picture - the destruction of a family - what saddness we bring upon ourselves, and the children suffer the most.
Duane
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
Sign of the times is it not? One wonders if there are still people who have had only one marriage. Awesome contest entry and good luck my friend... Dreamdancer
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Hello my friend,
Sign of the times is it not? One wonders if there are still people who have had only one marriage. Awesome contest entry and good luck my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Gramma Kathy
This is profound. Your message is clear, you have fulfilled the contest requirements, and the artwork is perfect.
What more can I say? You deserve to win!
Well done!
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This is profound. Your message is clear, you have fulfilled the contest requirements, and the artwork is perfect.
What more can I say? You deserve to win!
Well done!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Judian James
Well done. As you know, I too have suffered such heartache. The photo is very powerful to accompany your words BUT, if the phote were not there, your piece is very strong and speaks volumes about your life. well done Sue.
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Well done. As you know, I too have suffered such heartache. The photo is very powerful to accompany your words BUT, if the phote were not there, your piece is very strong and speaks volumes about your life. well done Sue.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
This is such a sad commentary on so many families now. But the "stories" work together for the contest. The picture is perfect for this story.
great work - sherry
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This is such a sad commentary on so many families now. But the "stories" work together for the contest. The picture is perfect for this story.
great work - sherry
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
Excellent!
Absolute opposites and I think the only one in the contest that I have read so far that has gone that route... good job of thinking outside the box!
Best of luck in the contest dear.
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Excellent!
Absolute opposites and I think the only one in the contest that I have read so far that has gone that route... good job of thinking outside the box!
Best of luck in the contest dear.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh ... SO good. We can make it what it should be, or not. One is so hard it's almost a daily battle (yes -- I have teenagers!) The other is easy, but the results are catastrophic. Good entry. Blessings, Deb
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Oh ... SO good. We can make it what it should be, or not. One is so hard it's almost a daily battle (yes -- I have teenagers!) The other is easy, but the results are catastrophic. Good entry. Blessings, Deb
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from jshep
Very powerful two sentences, Sue. And yes the question is, why? For we have a society of 50% of broken homes and children be shuffled around daily. Commitment in any aspect of one's life seems to be a difficult virtue in this society. Great entry and presentation. Good luck. Joyce
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Very powerful two sentences, Sue. And yes the question is, why? For we have a society of 50% of broken homes and children be shuffled around daily. Commitment in any aspect of one's life seems to be a difficult virtue in this society. Great entry and presentation. Good luck. Joyce
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from ladybird
Short pieces are realy hard to review, but this one certainly portrays the emotions of a family torn apart. It's easy to see in your words your own personal feelings. Well done.
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Short pieces are realy hard to review, but this one certainly portrays the emotions of a family torn apart. It's easy to see in your words your own personal feelings. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Firefly54
A sad but interesting little story set that fits the rules quite nicely! Was fun, wans't it? Good luck in the contest with this entry, Elaine
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A sad but interesting little story set that fits the rules quite nicely! Was fun, wans't it? Good luck in the contest with this entry, Elaine
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009