CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 91 "That First Kiss"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Poetic Friend
This acrostic was written so well that I did not know it was an acrostic. The lines were not choppy or forced at all.
You may want to highlight the first letter of the line to identify the poem as an acrostic. Just a thought, not required, of course.
Your poem highlights the anticipation and romance of a first kiss. Women hold such memories dearly. Your poem is a great indicator as to why.
Love it! Good luck in the contest.
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This acrostic was written so well that I did not know it was an acrostic. The lines were not choppy or forced at all.
You may want to highlight the first letter of the line to identify the poem as an acrostic. Just a thought, not required, of course.
Your poem highlights the anticipation and romance of a first kiss. Women hold such memories dearly. Your poem is a great indicator as to why.
Love it! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from LucidMind
That sounds like a perfect love at first site experience. Good idea for the Valentine's contest. Good luck, I thought it was good.
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That sounds like a perfect love at first site experience. Good idea for the Valentine's contest. Good luck, I thought it was good.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
Comment from Paradox Tremors
A wonderful little Acrostic poem my friend. Perfect in every way, could almost feel the 'kiss' myself. Enjoyed it and wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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A wonderful little Acrostic poem my friend. Perfect in every way, could almost feel the 'kiss' myself. Enjoyed it and wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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Paradox, thank you for your great review! And lovely compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from judiblaze
What a nice love poem, and great for V-Day. I didn't see anything wrong and thought it had a great flowing feeling to it. Good luck
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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What a nice love poem, and great for V-Day. I didn't see anything wrong and thought it had a great flowing feeling to it. Good luck
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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judiblaze, thank you for your lovely review and compliments! With regards, Sue
Comment from Jazh
This is a lovely poem - and very appropriate for Valentine's Day. The flow of it and the rhymes are so smooth that I didn't realise it was acrostic until I read your author notes! Well done. :)
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This is a lovely poem - and very appropriate for Valentine's Day. The flow of it and the rhymes are so smooth that I didn't realise it was acrostic until I read your author notes! Well done. :)
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2009