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CSP: A Collection of Poems

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A collection of poetry

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Comment from Myspal
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So very true! One of the attributes I fully enjoy about being a member of Fanstory is the pure honesty. Many people say it but don't express their feelings for fear of, I honestly don't know. But it is refreshing to see it in black and white and well written!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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I like the way you have the
words cascading down the
page. They certainly drive
home, my friend, it's all so
true-to-life and so depressing,
particularly for people such as
yourself with a daughter awaiting
the help she's entitled to.

Regards,
margaret.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from btru2u66
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I agree with you honey. It's all a mess and a pure shame. Thank you so much for sharing. I always say, "people don't understand nor do they seem to care, until it happens to them."

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from chaswriter
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Sue - You hit a nerve with this poem. I can't belive that congress gave out over $350B and most of it did not go to relieve the mortgage mess. I am so angry... calm down ... take a breath ... that's better. Okay. Loved your poem. Charlie

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from Just2Write
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Great Rant - I keep wondering where MY bailout is. It seems that mismanagement pays - big time. I think most of us could argue that we are just as worth as the big corporations. It is all a mess, to be sure. Thanks for shouting out. You are so right - there is never any money for the kids, but there is plenty for billion dollar boondoggles.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from artsygal
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Hey, you're well informed and poorly served by the government--you've got good reason to bitch!
Isn't it so like Bush to add a few more blunders to his record before leaving office. Like evil frosting on the proverbial cake of idiocy.
I So feel for you and your child. We can only hope Obama has a huge heart and a brain worthy of his charisma and public confidence(I think he does). Only a few more days. . .
I live in Canada but my elderly mom lives in Missouri and is trying unsuccessfully to sell her home so she can go into a retirement community with asisted living. So far, no luck at all and her health is very poor. Hope the market turns around. So many people are suffering!(everyone but the Big Three executives, and their private jets, eh?)
Thanks for your well expressed politically charged poem.
No one can possibly argue that it isn't the truth.
Hugs
artsygal / Sara

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from Algernon
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It's time to change this corrupt rat trap.
Just two parties to choose from is not good.

As for democracy: “Democracy means simply the bludgeoning of the people by the people for the people.” Wilde.

The rich get fatter on the backs of the poor and needy.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2009

Comment from JoAnna Lee
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BRAVO!!! You go, girl... You said a mouthful and then some... and it does seem they always make cuts in the worst possible places. Great Rant!

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009

Comment from LOA7
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Thank goodness for venting outlets! When I saw the title, I had to read it. I hope all goes well for your daughter. We will make it through all of this because that is what we do. Cheers!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009

Comment from eraserlynch
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Very passionate write and screams what many are feeling and saying inside. I hope things pick up soon for all ... we need to band together and support each other.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
    Well, if we don't watch the direction our HUGE central government is taking, we won't recognize America. I LOVE Thomas Jefferson. He said, "Every generation needs a revolution". I don't think he meant that literally, but he was keenly aware of the power men will usurp if not watched carefully! And it's time for term limits in Congress. (A soft revolution - ha!) Thanks for your review. :-)) Sue