Comment from Lois Delaney

Excellent

Very cute, Sixteezkid. Who'd have thought?
I thought the first line was good, especially. And to keep the story going is awesome. Great job!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2009

There's a story in anything, right?! Ha! I love going to rock concerts. Thanks very much for your generous review and comments! Cheers, Sue

Comment from JoAnna Lee

Excellent

Good little poem here. I'm confused, though. Your description says naani contest and it appears as Story in a Nonet contest. Did you put this in the wrong one? Tom can likely fix this for you...

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2009

Thanks! I just had a typo there. Will change that! Thanks for your most kind review. With regards, Sue

Comment from DragonSkulls

Excellent

Ha ha, great entry to this contest Sue. Front row to a Pearl Jam concert. I'm sure that was a blast? It's been a couple years sinse I've been to a concert. 1st one I've ever read on this site about a rock concert. Good job. Good luck and thanks for entering. /Ron

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2009

Yes! I was front row, center! 2003 in Phoenix - out of this world! Thanks so much for your great review and awesome comments. :-)) Sue

Comment from Johnny Carwash

Excellent

Never quite got the allure of Pearl Jam, but you captured the feeling of attending a live concert superbly here, so hats off to you. What a fine nonet.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2009

Best band since Zeppelin, in my books! Ha!! So glad you felt the mood of a concert here! Thanks so much for this most generous review and your compliments. :-)) Sue