CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 119 "A Winter's Reprieve"A collection of poetry
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Comment from JoAnna Lee
Great haiku, Sue. The warm weather today seems to have inspired a few of us. Judian wrote a children's poem and I wrote and posted a little love haiku. Check it out if you have time. I think you'll like it.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
PS -- Too bad it gas to get cold again... LOL
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Great haiku, Sue. The warm weather today seems to have inspired a few of us. Judian wrote a children's poem and I wrote and posted a little love haiku. Check it out if you have time. I think you'll like it.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
PS -- Too bad it gas to get cold again... LOL
Comment Written 29-Dec-2008
Comment from adewpearl
solid 5/7/5 form - great concrete image of the melting icicles, falling from the eaves like daggers - this concrete image is strong and is easy to visualize
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solid 5/7/5 form - great concrete image of the melting icicles, falling from the eaves like daggers - this concrete image is strong and is easy to visualize
Comment Written 28-Dec-2008
Comment from MissCellanea
Makes me long for the January thaw! Wonderful take on the 5-7-5. Great imagery. On a quiet day, I've been jumped by those falling icicles. Love the pic. Sue
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Makes me long for the January thaw! Wonderful take on the 5-7-5. Great imagery. On a quiet day, I've been jumped by those falling icicles. Love the pic. Sue
Comment Written 28-Dec-2008
Comment from rama devi
Well written haiku, a but premature for springtime musings...it is only December! (Just teasing).
WEll presented with artwork and color choice creating a mood.
I find no nits.
Warm regards,
rama devi
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2008
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Well written haiku, a but premature for springtime musings...it is only December! (Just teasing).
WEll presented with artwork and color choice creating a mood.
I find no nits.
Warm regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 28-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2008
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Hey, a girl's gotta hang on to any warm day ole man Winter will give us! HA! Thanks so much for your lovely review! With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from SherryHo
The words draw a vivid picture on their own, but I must say the photograph only enhances it.
Pros: Well written. Adheres to the 5/7/5
Cons: Could find none.
Suggestions: None
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The words draw a vivid picture on their own, but I must say the photograph only enhances it.
Pros: Well written. Adheres to the 5/7/5
Cons: Could find none.
Suggestions: None
Comment Written 28-Dec-2008
Comment from Rachon
Love your haiku. Great 5-7-5 form. Nice choice in picture, even tho your words were enough. Really good job.
Happy New Year,
Rachon
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Love your haiku. Great 5-7-5 form. Nice choice in picture, even tho your words were enough. Really good job.
Happy New Year,
Rachon
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2008
Comment from Artasylum
ouch...that could hurt you...remind me next time i'm staninding under sharp ice objects they can melt...good read...yours, diana
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ouch...that could hurt you...remind me next time i'm staninding under sharp ice objects they can melt...good read...yours, diana
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2008