Comment from GoodnightGreenEyes

Excellent

I loved this poem very much. It flowed together very beautifully. I relate to these words a lot. I've also felt imprisoned and trapped often, and you've captured that feeling perfectly.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008

Thanks so much GreenEyes! We've all felt trapped from time to time, and it's when we're at our lowest that our ticket to freedom presents itself, even if it is a thick sandstone wall to chip through. I appreciate your comments and the stars very much - again, thanks! xoxoxoxoxo

Comment from bluemountainmist

Excellent

So deep is the depression after the death of a loved one. I lost my oldest sister going on two years in a tragic way she was murdered by her husband. A pain I can't get past. So i know the pain here. A beautful writing with so much emotion and sadness but with a ray of light at the end of the tunnel. Nothing to be improved. Thank you for ths precious read

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008

Bless you bluemountanmist for this precious review. I'm happy this poem touched you and you could relate to it. Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. I hope one day you will find freedom from your pain, although it would be very difficult considering these tragic circumstances. xoxoxoxoxoxo