Stalker
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Dig Even Deeper"Jim and Lenny are hired to find a stalker
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Comment from Allezw2
Lady Gayle,
It's funny reading the idiot's justifications as they fit so well with the really notorious American and European spies of of the last century.
So the beat goes on. One guy hope to cut and run leaving his erstwhile collaborators in the lurch while the good guys and their canine counterparts are still hot to trot in the solution to the disappearances.
Nicely done.
Wayne
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2008
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Lady Gayle,
It's funny reading the idiot's justifications as they fit so well with the really notorious American and European spies of of the last century.
So the beat goes on. One guy hope to cut and run leaving his erstwhile collaborators in the lurch while the good guys and their canine counterparts are still hot to trot in the solution to the disappearances.
Nicely done.
Wayne
Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2008
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Hey Wayne,
I know what you mean. I felt it was all so cliche until I remembered the REAL spies who did this kind of thing...too much. I think you're going to like the way this goes down! Thanks for the great comments and your support.
Hugs,
Gayle
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hi Gayle, good progress I must say. You never know when a person is desperate for finances, family demands, etc, to what level they can come down. Just weakness I presume, taking the easy way out without thought for the consequences. They are the type of people that easily fall prey and are the victims of circumstances.
and would not want [to] fire him,
See you soon,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2008
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Hi Gayle, good progress I must say. You never know when a person is desperate for finances, family demands, etc, to what level they can come down. Just weakness I presume, taking the easy way out without thought for the consequences. They are the type of people that easily fall prey and are the victims of circumstances.
and would not want [to] fire him,
See you soon,
Sylvia
Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2008
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Hi Sylvia,
So good to see you again! Well, poor Dan, I don't think he's really thought this through to its logical conclusion.
Got that "to" in there, thanks for the eagle eye!
Hope to see you again soon and thanks for the great rating and comments.
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment from c_lucas
Well Gayle, you've done it again. Quite a mix, political interference, dishonest friends, and what appears to be an apparent dead end. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Well Gayle, you've done it again. Quite a mix, political interference, dishonest friends, and what appears to be an apparent dead end. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Hey Charlie,
Yeah, we're going to get very busy here. Poor Dan, he's playing with the wrong group, I fear. Thanks so much for the R&R and the great comments, my friend. You know how much I appreciate you!
Hugs,
Gayle
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Thank you, Gayle. I ran into a new writer on line PaulaWolfe. I was really impressed with her work. Charlie
Comment from Terror2s
Yes, I'm afraid having not read the preceding chapters i am at a disadvantage to give you a wothwhile review. I liked your use of dialogue and the piece was well written, but i is tough for me to comment on the story itself. Terror
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Yes, I'm afraid having not read the preceding chapters i am at a disadvantage to give you a wothwhile review. I liked your use of dialogue and the piece was well written, but i is tough for me to comment on the story itself. Terror
Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Hi Terror,
I feel like I should put a warning on here, cause it is impossible to enjoy a chapter...let alone half a chapter in the 'almost' end of the book
Kudos for being able to hang in there and for the kind rating. Some blame the author when they don't know what's going on. Thanks again,
Gayle
Comment from RenieReader
Oh, my gosh. How easy it is to deceive ourselves when greed gets in the way. This poor sucker is in way too deep and there's no way the Russians are going to let him skate free. Dan is going to make the perfect scapegoat. Sigh. Very sad.
As much as Andy liked him personally and would not want [to] fire him,
Hugs,
Renie
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Oh, my gosh. How easy it is to deceive ourselves when greed gets in the way. This poor sucker is in way too deep and there's no way the Russians are going to let him skate free. Dan is going to make the perfect scapegoat. Sigh. Very sad.
As much as Andy liked him personally and would not want [to] fire him,
Hugs,
Renie
Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Oh Renie! A sixer! I am truly flattered by your words and the rating is fabulous. Will add that 'to' in there
Yeah, you're so right there. I would imagine he won't be with us to very much longer. And with him gone, wow! Now what?
Thank you so much, sweetie for the outstanding rating and kind words, not to mention those beautiful eagle eyes!
Hugs,
Gayle
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Gayle: In case I haven't said it lately: I love your work, and you.
Renie
Comment from Korton
Excellent chapter Gayle, I smell a betrayal coming here. Dan is rapidly moving down that one way street from being an asset to a liability. I will be very surprised if he makes it out of the parking lot alive. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Excellent chapter Gayle, I smell a betrayal coming here. Dan is rapidly moving down that one way street from being an asset to a liability. I will be very surprised if he makes it out of the parking lot alive. Very well done.
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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LOL! Frank, you never disappoint. Am I too transparent or are these kinds of books your preferred reading and I'm just on track?
Thanks dear for the great words and for always being so perspicacious. You give me big grins!
Hugs,
Gayle
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Actually, my prefered reading is adventure/mystery, I've read everything written by Vince Flynn, most of Clive Cussler and am drawing down of David Baldacci, James Patterson, Jeffrey Archer and a few others. So in answer to your question, you're right in line.
Comment from Earthwriter
i have read many of your chapters and have enjoyed the consistent high quality of your posts excellent job my friend i enjoyed it
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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i have read many of your chapters and have enjoyed the consistent high quality of your posts excellent job my friend i enjoyed it
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2008
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Hi Earthwriter,
So nice to see you again! I appreciate you stopping by and the sweet words. You are much appreciated!
Hugs,
Gayle