Comment from Syrupysweet

Excellent

Wonderful chapter! Great dialogue. I don't have anything to pinpoint, but this was certainly an enjoyable read. Great job!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2008

HiSS---Thanks for support--much appreciated---hope you can read more----Doug

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

thanks for the wonderful bit of nostalgia. i was 15 then. i did see one small spag. easy to fix. I'll stay and keep your friends company." (change friend's to friends)

1977-such an innocent time. when i thought the world would never end or was that time? LOL i forget. =)
imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2008

Hi babylonia---Thanks again----I've got to stop writing pleurals as possesives----you've corrected me on that before-----Hope you'll cont reading----I really appreciate your reviews----Doug

reply by babylonia on 05-Jan-2008

it is a common mistake and you aren't the only one who does it. my error comes with the word suppose/supposed ... LOL my arch nemesis. keep up the good writing and i will be reading. =)
you are welcome
babylonia

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2008

Thanks B---supposed is a common one----as when people say---"probly" for probably-----Doug

reply by babylonia on 06-Jan-2008

doug,
it clips my wings every time. LOL oh well. hope you are having a good night/day. =)
babylonia

Comment from syndactl

Excellent

Bravo, doug! You did an amazing job with the dialogue and the character description. Your writing style easily captivates the reader and makes them want more. Excellent!

-syndactl

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2008

Hi syn-----WOW----wonderful comments----I just posted this 5 minutes ago--you're a speed reader no doubt----Hope you'll get a chance to read some of prior chapters and new ones--I appreciate your time reviwing---know it's a lot of work---Doug

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

this was refreshing...i have read about death, depression, tragedies old and new...thanks for sharing new love. i'm worn out. so thanks for bringing life back to all of this death. yours, diana.

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2008

Hi Di-----Wonderful comments ---thank you---I appreciate your support----perhaps you shouln't read prior chapters---lot of death and dying--LOL---however---victims go to heaven--or somewhere like it---thanks again---Doug