L in the Alphabet Soup
Lord Bubbles and Lady Luna13 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A sweet story as always. The power of friendship both human and animal. I only saw one tiny typo.
Lord Bubbles - that's my goldfish's name. (missing the " before the word Lord)
Enjoyed this one. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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A sweet story as always. The power of friendship both human and animal. I only saw one tiny typo.
Lord Bubbles - that's my goldfish's name. (missing the " before the word Lord)
Enjoyed this one. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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I hope a late thank you is worth as much as one on time... I always appreciate your time and your thoughts concerning my posts. I just can't seem to keep up.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AHH so sweet. I know children would enjoy reading this story and the message. As a retired teacher, I'm already thinking of lesson plans to go with this story. LOL Thank you for sharing it with us.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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AHH so sweet. I know children would enjoy reading this story and the message. As a retired teacher, I'm already thinking of lesson plans to go with this story. LOL Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
A great next installment in your children's book. IT was cute that the fish got depressed and needed a friend just like Lyla needed a friend. It was so nice that she made a friend through the connection of gold fish. I think children would enjoy this chapter.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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A great next installment in your children's book. IT was cute that the fish got depressed and needed a friend just like Lyla needed a friend. It was so nice that she made a friend through the connection of gold fish. I think children would enjoy this chapter.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for taking your time to read, review and enjoy my writing. I apologize for not being able to keep up with my heartfelt promises, but please know that I do appreciate your thoughts and comments very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol