Comment from Tim Margetts

Excellent

Brad, well done sir.
What a delightfully written short, erotic tale with a twist. Though I do have to admit, it is a beautiful car so I can understand your protagonist's desire and affection.
I want one too.
Tim

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025

Thanks, Tim. For sure, we gotta let our other half know we love em. But Damn, I saw a nice looking, Jag XKE, Twin Turbo, the other day. :>)

reply by Tim Margetts on 08-Mar-2025

I have had a couple of Jags, had a nice S class, she was a beautiful thing. I like the XK, the F-type is my dream Jag.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Very clever. But couldn't you at least grease the zert nipples? (smiley face here)
Now Jesse stood over her, his heart now... - the story would read better without either now. Six 'nows' all told. A bit heavy.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025

Now, you tell me. :>)

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

Lol, I was wondering where this was going especially when you named the "tool" a tool. I figured I would return the favor reviewing yours as you did mine. You did a great job using the words to imply two different meanings, where the reader had to figure it out as the story went along. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025

Thanks Lana. That was a real challenge of finding double meaning words—many a rewrite for sure.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, you made me smile here Brad as you tuned up this fine filly, you obviously love your cars and I fond your post very funny indeed. My Father owned a turquoise Lotus Elan and he loved that car, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025

Thanks Dolly, my wife is still number 1, but those cars still have their memories.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and the excellent twist at the end. I do think some males are completely happy with their cars. LOL Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Yep, you got it, Barbara, at least until they grow up.

Comment from Arabellesmom

Excellent

I enjoyed your writing a lot. The picture you chose goes very well with your writing. Not to mention, you're an amazing writer. Great writing and great work!!!!

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Thanks Arabellesmom, much appreciated. I put a newer pix over it, but you must have caught it, just as I placed it.