Pure Pleasure
A night of passion21 total reviews
Comment from Arabellesmom
Amazing !!!! I enjoyed your writing a lot. The picture you chose goes very well with your writing. Not to mention, you're an amazing writer. Great writing and great work!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Amazing !!!! I enjoyed your writing a lot. The picture you chose goes very well with your writing. Not to mention, you're an amazing writer. Great writing and great work!!!!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Awe! Thank you so much for taking the time to review this. It's kinda like a secret entry to read it at your own risk because of the warning. Thank you for the compliment.
Blessings
Lana
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Comment from Sanku
This could be the best entry for this contest because this is erotic and then more erotic And thank god it is legitimate The confidence that she has that she could make the dream real also is worthy all the best
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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This could be the best entry for this contest because this is erotic and then more erotic And thank god it is legitimate The confidence that she has that she could make the dream real also is worthy all the best
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much! Yes, I did not want to write something like this and not have it be a married couple. My husband and I are part of a marriage ministry so it would feel dirty if this story wasn't about a married couple.
Thank you for clicking past the warning and reading and reviewing.
Lana
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
That shower scene is undoubtedly erotic, and the ending is a sweet statement of love. That a woman still dreams of sex with her husband, then wakes next to him and ponders how to wake him, is the stuff that dream marriages are made of.
Well written, and I wish you luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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That shower scene is undoubtedly erotic, and the ending is a sweet statement of love. That a woman still dreams of sex with her husband, then wakes next to him and ponders how to wake him, is the stuff that dream marriages are made of.
Well written, and I wish you luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much, Pam. I enjoyed your review.
Comment from marilyn quillen
wow, very erotic and nicely written, fantastic entry for the contest. nomber one here you come at least I know where my vote goes! Cold shower be damned, I think maybe I'll bring my husband in to read it, lol, wish me luck!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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wow, very erotic and nicely written, fantastic entry for the contest. nomber one here you come at least I know where my vote goes! Cold shower be damned, I think maybe I'll bring my husband in to read it, lol, wish me luck!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Haha! This is a great review! Thank you for all the shiny stars!
Comment from Begin Again
It couldn't have been done any better than how you wrote it. It made a lot of memories flood back into my mind, and a few tears, but it was worth it. I bet your husband likes it, too.
I am sure this will do fantastic in the contest. It's sexual and titillating without being overly graphic. Well done.
Good luck!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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It couldn't have been done any better than how you wrote it. It made a lot of memories flood back into my mind, and a few tears, but it was worth it. I bet your husband likes it, too.
I am sure this will do fantastic in the contest. It's sexual and titillating without being overly graphic. Well done.
Good luck!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much, Carol. Hugs to you! I appreciate all those wonderful stars.!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Cold shower, heck no. I'm married to my delectably beautiful bride! And we're in our 70s (please don't go blind).
Nicely written. Good imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Cold shower, heck no. I'm married to my delectably beautiful bride! And we're in our 70s (please don't go blind).
Nicely written. Good imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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I love your response in your review. And I will try not to go blind. lol
Thank you for your well wishes.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, I need to shower after reading this pulsating throbbing tale of you mixing like puzzle pieces.
This is the most arousing story I have read yet from all the entries. This one is the best. The shower scene brings me to my knees, and the walk to the bed is out of the world with passion and desire, and to find out it was a dream of you and your beloved husband is the kicker to beat all.
Thanks for the rush! I enjoyed reading this immensely!
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Yes, I need to shower after reading this pulsating throbbing tale of you mixing like puzzle pieces.
This is the most arousing story I have read yet from all the entries. This one is the best. The shower scene brings me to my knees, and the walk to the bed is out of the world with passion and desire, and to find out it was a dream of you and your beloved husband is the kicker to beat all.
Thanks for the rush! I enjoyed reading this immensely!
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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You're welcome… Lol thank you for the review.
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What a rush of emotion!
Great arousal scene!
Jesse
Comment from Thesis
This is a good entry to the contest. It has enough heat to classify as erotic. Your description of the encounter is tastefully done, without getting too graphic. I think you will do well. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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This is a good entry to the contest. It has enough heat to classify as erotic. Your description of the encounter is tastefully done, without getting too graphic. I think you will do well. Good luck.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Thank you, I was hoping it would be tastefully done. I appreciate your review and your comments!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'll never look at a shower the same again, and it's only a dream. I liked the way she was pondering making her dream come true. Good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'll never look at a shower the same again, and it's only a dream. I liked the way she was pondering making her dream come true. Good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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lol 😂
I read this to my husband the other night and then I was taking a shower the next day and I couldn't look at a shower any differently either and then I was wondering what my husband was thinking if he knew I was in the shower lol. He definitely has made a few comments since then hoping for this to become a reality.
I mean, we did have an enjoyable evening that night when I first read it to him ha ha ha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual, passionate and subtle post with a very intimate theme Lana and a great way to celebrate an anniversary, I congratulate you on your many years together and the lovely passion you still share. A fine write, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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This is a sensual, passionate and subtle post with a very intimate theme Lana and a great way to celebrate an anniversary, I congratulate you on your many years together and the lovely passion you still share. A fine write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much, Dolly! I changed the ending of it a little bit because it is supposed to be non-fiction and a couple of you thought it was our anniversary when it's not until June lol but I did read this to my husband and I think he wants us to put this into practice ha ha ha.
