Willing Hearts
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Comment from Teri7
This is a really great six-star chapter my friend. I look forward to your new Novel. It sounds like it will be a great one too. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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This is a really great six-star chapter my friend. I look forward to your new Novel. It sounds like it will be a great one too. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter and the final chapter of an excellent book. I do not have enough six stars for every chapter. I celebrate your book on the last chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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This is another excellent chapter and the final chapter of an excellent book. I do not have enough six stars for every chapter. I celebrate your book on the last chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful ending to an excellent story, I know your characters are written with their day to day adventures, and through this subtle but swift getting.to know one another, I do believe we can get to know our intended, more swiftly than is sometimes the case, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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What a wonderful ending to an excellent story, I know your characters are written with their day to day adventures, and through this subtle but swift getting.to know one another, I do believe we can get to know our intended, more swiftly than is sometimes the case, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, so here we have it, the long awaited for but happy ending. That was another great story. I will have to think about a title. Right now it's bedtime here in Spain. I really enjoyed this. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Hi Barbara, so here we have it, the long awaited for but happy ending. That was another great story. I will have to think about a title. Right now it's bedtime here in Spain. I really enjoyed this. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Congratulations on finishing another book. A happy ending for all, and his change of role should bring a little more stability into their lives. Well done, and best wishes. Hope your book is very successful.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Congratulations on finishing another book. A happy ending for all, and his change of role should bring a little more stability into their lives. Well done, and best wishes. Hope your book is very successful.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I was expecting Noah and Sami to ride off into the sunset after the wedding, but your ending is fine. We will send this novel off into the sunset with six stars.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I was expecting Noah and Sami to ride off into the sunset after the wedding, but your ending is fine. We will send this novel off into the sunset with six stars.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. In a romance, all we need to know is they'll be married. I think I accomplished that. LOL
Comment from jim vecchio
I am so sorry to see this end, but I'm looking very forward to your next work. My eyes are going. Is there a chance you can embolden the print or make it slightly larger? I just came from lunch, which was interrupted by a nosebleed. Nachos and queso sound terrific. One small hiccup:"You don't have to wear a tux, unless you want too." (should be "to").
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I am so sorry to see this end, but I'm looking very forward to your next work. My eyes are going. Is there a chance you can embolden the print or make it slightly larger? I just came from lunch, which was interrupted by a nosebleed. Nachos and queso sound terrific. One small hiccup:"You don't have to wear a tux, unless you want too." (should be "to").
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I write in 26-point font. It's the way it comes on FanStory. What I do in this situation is copy and paste to a word document then enlarge it. I don't save it and delete after I've read it. Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from estory
This is the long awaited pay off for all those chapters of romance and all its ups and downs. Noah shows how he is willing to make changes in his job to accommodate getting married, so he can have a more flexible schedule for Sami. Sami is by now pretty much ready to say yes. We all saw this coming but you wrapped it up pretty nicely. As for a title, I will have to think about it. It's hard to keep in mind the earlier parts of the book that were posted so long ago. estory
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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This is the long awaited pay off for all those chapters of romance and all its ups and downs. Noah shows how he is willing to make changes in his job to accommodate getting married, so he can have a more flexible schedule for Sami. Sami is by now pretty much ready to say yes. We all saw this coming but you wrapped it up pretty nicely. As for a title, I will have to think about it. It's hard to keep in mind the earlier parts of the book that were posted so long ago. estory
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review and support. Please think about it.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad I am around for the ending of the wonderful novel. I have enjoyed it all although I missed a few chapters. The ending is perfect and I assume Myra must have gotten much better for Sami to plan on her being in the wedding. I'm like you, I have a terrible time coming up with titles. Willing Hearts sound good but it doesn't distinguish this novel from other romances since at some point there are willing hearts in all marriages.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I'm glad I am around for the ending of the wonderful novel. I have enjoyed it all although I missed a few chapters. The ending is perfect and I assume Myra must have gotten much better for Sami to plan on her being in the wedding. I'm like you, I have a terrible time coming up with titles. Willing Hearts sound good but it doesn't distinguish this novel from other romances since at some point there are willing hearts in all marriages.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I've been able to read more regularly. I truly enjoy your imagery and authentic dialogues. When I saw the engagement ring image, my fan instincts became excited. Your characters are sl consistent that I knew Noah would say:
Noah's eyebrows rose. "Your door should always be locked."
Hmm. A title. Yes th as ts a l ways hard. Was this a working title? Possibly extend it like, "With Willing Hearts."
Sounds good to me (?)
Have a good Sunday,
Alexandra:)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I've been able to read more regularly. I truly enjoy your imagery and authentic dialogues. When I saw the engagement ring image, my fan instincts became excited. Your characters are sl consistent that I knew Noah would say:
Noah's eyebrows rose. "Your door should always be locked."
Hmm. A title. Yes th as ts a l ways hard. Was this a working title? Possibly extend it like, "With Willing Hearts."
Sounds good to me (?)
Have a good Sunday,
Alexandra:)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review and support. Putting a 'With' in front does add to it.
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Yes, I think so. :)
