The Kirby Case - Part 3
A homicide detective tries to catch a serial killer26 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
Loving the painstaking way they are tracking down the evidence. From such scarce clues can a killer be found and stopped..
This really is very good, Pam.
Now onto the next part.
Tim x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Loving the painstaking way they are tracking down the evidence. From such scarce clues can a killer be found and stopped..
This really is very good, Pam.
Now onto the next part.
Tim x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your encouragement and a great review
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
You do the difficult task of rhyming and telling a story in tandem.
I'm eager to follow your clues and find out who the culprit is.
Good luck, Pam.
Have a healthy and happy new year.
Cindy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Pam,
You do the difficult task of rhyming and telling a story in tandem.
I'm eager to follow your clues and find out who the culprit is.
Good luck, Pam.
Have a healthy and happy new year.
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cindy for a great review. Wishing you a healthy and happy new year as well.
Comment from Begin Again
What takes me tens of thousands of words to write and explain, you, my dear, are doing it in rhyme and have me grasping at each clue to see where it might be leading us. this is fun!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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What takes me tens of thousands of words to write and explain, you, my dear, are doing it in rhyme and have me grasping at each clue to see where it might be leading us. this is fun!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol for another wonderful review
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Pam,
Another great edition. Detective back in the day really had to beat the pavement. They didn't have all this high tech stuff they do now.
I actually lived in an area that there was a serial killer. He liked small children an I was 10 at the time. However, being young I knew nothing about him. I'm sure God had his hand on me and protected me from him.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
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Pam,
Another great edition. Detective back in the day really had to beat the pavement. They didn't have all this high tech stuff they do now.
I actually lived in an area that there was a serial killer. He liked small children an I was 10 at the time. However, being young I knew nothing about him. I'm sure God had his hand on me and protected me from him.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem slows the slow but steady progress of the detectives who are painstakingly hunting down all of these shoe leads before there was such a thing as surveillance cameras on every corner.
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This poem slows the slow but steady progress of the detectives who are painstakingly hunting down all of these shoe leads before there was such a thing as surveillance cameras on every corner.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Bill for a wonderful review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're doing a great job writing this serial murder mystery in poetic form. It's fun and easy to read. You include all the facts and use rhyme. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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You're doing a great job writing this serial murder mystery in poetic form. It's fun and easy to read. You include all the facts and use rhyme. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Barbara for another wonderful review
Comment from royowen
One would certainly hope that this monster is eventually caught and put away so the female population have nothining more to worry about, as always your work is impeccably written, Pam, well done, blessings Roy
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One would certainly hope that this monster is eventually caught and put away so the female population have nothining more to worry about, as always your work is impeccably written, Pam, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you Roy for a wonderful review
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My pleasure
Comment from Ulla
Right, the story is moving on. This is absolutely wonderful writing and then in poetic form I'm intrigued and I can't wait to reading on this wonderfully written Pam. All best, Ulla xcx
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Right, the story is moving on. This is absolutely wonderful writing and then in poetic form I'm intrigued and I can't wait to reading on this wonderfully written Pam. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for following my story and for a great review
Comment from nomi338
I suspected as much. I hope that those resistant to high tech development realize how helpful these new tools are to fighting crime and helping the authorities in bringing these monster to justice. I am all the way in on this thrilling series. Great job.
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I suspected as much. I hope that those resistant to high tech development realize how helpful these new tools are to fighting crime and helping the authorities in bringing these monster to justice. I am all the way in on this thrilling series. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for a great and wonderful review
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like that you are leading us to victory. Victory by the readily clues. Much evidence is becoming available. I like that you are presenting each part one at a time. I like a good mystery.
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I like that you are leading us to victory. Victory by the readily clues. Much evidence is becoming available. I like that you are presenting each part one at a time. I like a good mystery.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you darling for following my poem and for a great review
