Peace
A poem about Peace59 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Harry,
This heartfelt poem truly opines about today's broken world. Your words are poignant and your images bring sadness to the reader. I hope people wake up and change our world, before it is too late.
Blessings, and good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Harry,
This heartfelt poem truly opines about today's broken world. Your words are poignant and your images bring sadness to the reader. I hope people wake up and change our world, before it is too late.
Blessings, and good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Yes, Cindy. You are so right! Thank you for your kind review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Harry,
I think we are all yearning for peace from war and other violence that brings death and destructions. We need to find a way to end drive by and mass shootings and bring safer and more peaceful living.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hi Harry,
I think we are all yearning for peace from war and other violence that brings death and destructions. We need to find a way to end drive by and mass shootings and bring safer and more peaceful living.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Joan for your kind review. I really appreciate that! And I will check out the book too.
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You are most kindly welcome, Harry.
If you choose to but it, please tell me how you liked it or leave a review on Amazon.
Joan
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Will do!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
cool poem about peace, the world, changes war and peace and everything in between very timely meditation as we witness the peaceful transfer of power in the US
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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cool poem about peace, the world, changes war and peace and everything in between very timely meditation as we witness the peaceful transfer of power in the US
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Yes, Jake. I believe so. At least I am hoping we can still get it right. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Tina Crute
Your poem about peace makes a strong point. we are doing all the same wrong things so nothing changes. When will we learn, I wonder? Your bleak background color suits the tone of the peace-less theme. You've well-expressed something that is difficult to define. It's moving:)
Tina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Your poem about peace makes a strong point. we are doing all the same wrong things so nothing changes. When will we learn, I wonder? Your bleak background color suits the tone of the peace-less theme. You've well-expressed something that is difficult to define. It's moving:)
Tina
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Tina. I really appreciate your kind review!
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You are welcome!
Comment from jmdg1954
Your poem is staying the world as today in a well defined, logical method,
Hadn't the world basically been the same as this what seems forever?
Very thought provoking. Nicely presented.
John
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Your poem is staying the world as today in a well defined, logical method,
Hadn't the world basically been the same as this what seems forever?
Very thought provoking. Nicely presented.
John
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you John. I really appreciate your kind review!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Nicely done, Harry.
This poem captures in a thought-provoking manner the state of the world we live in.
I love the rhyming structure it adds strength and direction, and well done on that great rhyme for journey.
Tim
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Nicely done, Harry.
This poem captures in a thought-provoking manner the state of the world we live in.
I love the rhyming structure it adds strength and direction, and well done on that great rhyme for journey.
Tim
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Tim for your review! I really appreciate that!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It is certainly a longing that many have displayed although those longings don't seem to have made it to the upper tiers of 'power' and the need to hold onto such... sigh. A heartfelt offering here that appeals to many... Thanx for sharing your pen! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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It is certainly a longing that many have displayed although those longings don't seem to have made it to the upper tiers of 'power' and the need to hold onto such... sigh. A heartfelt offering here that appeals to many... Thanx for sharing your pen! ;)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Well, thank you so much Y.M. Roger. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent poem that reminds us of our responsibility as a human race to seek avenues of less resistance and opportunities for greater connection and involvement with one another. I appreciate the lament that tells us we need to do better without picking one side or another and excoriating everyone else. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This is an excellent poem that reminds us of our responsibility as a human race to seek avenues of less resistance and opportunities for greater connection and involvement with one another. I appreciate the lament that tells us we need to do better without picking one side or another and excoriating everyone else. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is done quite well. Line five is unwieldy, It does not flow naturally. "Peace we are not learning". Try :
Why are we not learning? Otherwise you have no nits for me to pick. Us it or magic one of your own. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This is done quite well. Line five is unwieldy, It does not flow naturally. "Peace we are not learning". Try :
Why are we not learning? Otherwise you have no nits for me to pick. Us it or magic one of your own. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Yes, I know. I always looked at myself as kind of a Bob Dylan type never following anyone or the rules lol...Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
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:-)
Comment from zanya
The final two lines of the poem gives us readers some food for thought about 'Peace' as the New Year begins and in stanza one line three the poet expresses his sorrow and his reaction to an absence of peace
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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The final two lines of the poem gives us readers some food for thought about 'Peace' as the New Year begins and in stanza one line three the poet expresses his sorrow and his reaction to an absence of peace
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much!
