Life After Death
fifteen syllable entry13 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
Well, that's an interesting view of what we become when we are gone. It is well written, nicely presented and the monkey picture is cute. I am lousy at counting syllables, but I'm sure it is right. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Well, that's an interesting view of what we become when we are gone. It is well written, nicely presented and the monkey picture is cute. I am lousy at counting syllables, but I'm sure it is right. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
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Thank you. Sometimes it takes an effort, doesn't it, to meet the required one-hundred-fifty characters in a review. Sometimes, I cheat and simply garble (kanduifbabuf) letters.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Tom... you did a great job on this philosophical poem that's makes your readers stop and think. We certainly don't know when nor where. The rhyming is perfect, but let me warn you that the Brits will tell you it doesn't rhyme because they say "agane" with the strong a sound. I've been through that battle before when rhyming was essential. Good luck, may friend
Melissa
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Hello Tom... you did a great job on this philosophical poem that's makes your readers stop and think. We certainly don't know when nor where. The rhyming is perfect, but let me warn you that the Brits will tell you it doesn't rhyme because they say "agane" with the strong a sound. I've been through that battle before when rhyming was essential. Good luck, may friend
Melissa
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Is FS England based? If not, it should fare well. Besides, was rhyming required??? Thanks for the input.
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Hey Tom... no, FS is based in NYC. It's just that I thought you might be called on it. You are right. No rhyme is required. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment from Begin Again
I hope and pray that we will be together again with those we love but in a far better version. There will be no aches and pains or sorrow to bear. Just one beautiful eternity for all.
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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I hope and pray that we will be together again with those we love but in a far better version. There will be no aches and pains or sorrow to bear. Just one beautiful eternity for all.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Amen... and yet I think if not... what?
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Amen... and yet I think if not... what?
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Amen... and yet I think if not... what?
