Is Now A Good Time?
A Father Daughter poem. N1 in the trilogy.13 total reviews
Comment from Julie G1
This poem conveys clearly a childhood word picture of an inner emotion. The language and format chosen are expressive, and evocative. This poet has composed well the nature of families. Worked well for this reader.
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This poem conveys clearly a childhood word picture of an inner emotion. The language and format chosen are expressive, and evocative. This poet has composed well the nature of families. Worked well for this reader.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from papa55mike
Wow! This poem is amazingly written. I love the format of the excuses the father used to push her away again. That pain never turned to bitterness, and that love finally won out with persistence. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Wow! This poem is amazingly written. I love the format of the excuses the father used to push her away again. That pain never turned to bitterness, and that love finally won out with persistence. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much! especially for 6 stars and your kind words! I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Is Now a Good Time?, seems to be a dialogue between two related but opposing family members who have a shaky relationship in the midst of some heavy reality.
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This poem, Is Now a Good Time?, seems to be a dialogue between two related but opposing family members who have a shaky relationship in the midst of some heavy reality.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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That is the intention thank you. This is the first of three to show the journey between father and daughter as they mend their relationship.
