Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You're such a sensual poet and even bring up tastes in addition to touch and smells and sights. I guess since God created all those senses, we can experience His presence in all those ways. In Psalm 34, the Psalmist says, "Taste and see that the Lord is good."

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

I made a few changes since you read it, I hope it's better. Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate your encouragement, big sister. I am happy that you like it.

I like your Psalm 34, I added "Do you not know that you are a temple of God and that the Spirit of God dwells in you?" - 1 Corinthians 3:16, with ties to the last stanza.

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marival

reply by lyenochka on 11-Dec-2024

Yes, I got that reference! 💖

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024

You are the only one

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is wonderfully worded in his beautifully presented and I enjoyed listening to it very much. May you have a lovely evening and may God bless you with a good day tomorrow and for the rest of the year and God bless you with a very merry Christmas. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent and helpful review. I appreciate your kind words.

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