Snow, Snow, Snow
Snow is everywhere, is everything, white gold.18 total reviews
Comment from Colorado Owl
(Is there a misprint in the writing prompt for this? "no winter themes??)
Your poem paints a lovely picture, which is suited well to the haiku. Thank you.
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(Is there a misprint in the writing prompt for this? "no winter themes??)
Your poem paints a lovely picture, which is suited well to the haiku. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Appears to meet competition requirements. As I understand it Haiku is meant to paint the picture with words. Your entry does this. Thanks for sharing and I hope you do well in the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Appears to meet competition requirements. As I understand it Haiku is meant to paint the picture with words. Your entry does this. Thanks for sharing and I hope you do well in the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a wonderful 5-7-5 winter Haiku poem. I like how you state snow is like white gold. This could be the case for people who like all the winter sports.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
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What a wonderful 5-7-5 winter Haiku poem. I like how you state snow is like white gold. This could be the case for people who like all the winter sports.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your Nature Haiku meets the contest rules and structure. I love the manner you capture the advent of winter and the snows that cap clothe the mountains. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Your Nature Haiku meets the contest rules and structure. I love the manner you capture the advent of winter and the snows that cap clothe the mountains. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Had the advantage on this one. Lived in the mountains in Colorado. Winter is always just around the corner.
Comment from DonandVicki
A haiku that brings out the true meaning of old man winter. Will the contest not let you use a photograph or image? I think a photo would complement your work.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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A haiku that brings out the true meaning of old man winter. Will the contest not let you use a photograph or image? I think a photo would complement your work.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thanks and a photo would help. Will add one. I am old also and have loved that others old man,
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Snow, Snow, Snow, has the proper formatting and sees the entrance of the first real snow as it brings the night and the white blanket of cold.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This haiku, Snow, Snow, Snow, has the proper formatting and sees the entrance of the first real snow as it brings the night and the white blanket of cold.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Lived in Colorado and we worshiped the first snow of the year. Many times early September. White Gold.
Comment from Gayla putnam
The beauty of a Haiku. You described the beauty of winter in a few short lines. I love winter moon; snowflakes begin. I could almost see them swirling. It is a very peaceful poem. gayla
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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The beauty of a Haiku. You described the beauty of winter in a few short lines. I love winter moon; snowflakes begin. I could almost see them swirling. It is a very peaceful poem. gayla
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the review. A winter wonderland is a wonder to behold.
Comment from kahpot
The thought of snow-covered mountains is a wonderful image (maybe some artwork) would enhance these words, it is that time of year, when the sun sets the cold comes, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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The thought of snow-covered mountains is a wonderful image (maybe some artwork) would enhance these words, it is that time of year, when the sun sets the cold comes, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Sing along: Let it snow, Let it snow, Let it snow. Thanks, get out the winter gear.