Willing Hearts
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Barbara, you are a romantic lady. I love this chapter as much as the other ones. I'm glad Mark is gone and out of the picture. I think Noah and Sami handled it well. I'm glad Noah asked her father's blessings. It looks like everything is falling into place. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Barbara, you are a romantic lady. I love this chapter as much as the other ones. I'm glad Mark is gone and out of the picture. I think Noah and Sami handled it well. I'm glad Noah asked her father's blessings. It looks like everything is falling into place. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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There will be one more bump in the road. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
In spite of certain articles written on how we deal with scores for writing, I am still happy with how I do it. Thanks again for yet another great read. A couple of things to look at. We're nothing a(delete space) like."
maybe America is different?... "I'll let your mom know the(re[y]'ll be
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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In spite of certain articles written on how we deal with scores for writing, I am still happy with how I do it. Thanks again for yet another great read. A couple of things to look at. We're nothing a(delete space) like."
maybe America is different?... "I'll let your mom know the(re[y]'ll be
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I have made the corrections. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Mark's appearance was a surprise .And he suggested that she could rehome Jasper! very presumptuous and pushy ..Noah is diametrically opposite.. Very sweet of him to ask permission from her father..
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Mark's appearance was a surprise .And he suggested that she could rehome Jasper! very presumptuous and pushy ..Noah is diametrically opposite.. Very sweet of him to ask permission from her father..
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I couldn't picture not asking her father permission. He understood how close of a family they are.
Comment from lyenochka
The difference Noah and Marc could not be more drastic! Obviously, Marc is abusive and only cares about himself and doesn't even listen to Sami or care that she's allergic to daisies! Goodness, what a creep!
I hope Noah knows he'll be part of a very tight-knit family as news traveled super fast from the father to the mother!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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The difference Noah and Marc could not be more drastic! Obviously, Marc is abusive and only cares about himself and doesn't even listen to Sami or care that she's allergic to daisies! Goodness, what a creep!
I hope Noah knows he'll be part of a very tight-knit family as news traveled super fast from the father to the mother!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Noah will have to get used to the family. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
An enjoyable chapter but I was surprised at the first part. Her ex-boyfriend just happened to show up? Where has he been over the last month? Would a customer really help him if she didn't want her whereabouts known? Did he really not know she had a dog? Very presumptuous to expect her to rehome Jasper! And he did not know about her flower allergies? Somehow I think these things need to be clarified to make it more believable. He seems to suddenly come from nowhere.
Wendy
" ... We're nothing a like." (alike)
"I'll let your mom know they'll be two more mouths to feed." (there'll be ...)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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An enjoyable chapter but I was surprised at the first part. Her ex-boyfriend just happened to show up? Where has he been over the last month? Would a customer really help him if she didn't want her whereabouts known? Did he really not know she had a dog? Very presumptuous to expect her to rehome Jasper! And he did not know about her flower allergies? Somehow I think these things need to be clarified to make it more believable. He seems to suddenly come from nowhere.
Wendy
" ... We're nothing a like." (alike)
"I'll let your mom know they'll be two more mouths to feed." (there'll be ...)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Marc and Sami had been together for over a year and a half before he broke it off. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how exciting!! And what a polite young man to ask Dad first... boy, is she ever gonna be surprised... although, I do fear that Marc's ego is not gonna let go that easily... Know this is really 'into' your book, but the reading is easy and the dialogue great to follow! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck with future chapters! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Oh, how exciting!! And what a polite young man to ask Dad first... boy, is she ever gonna be surprised... although, I do fear that Marc's ego is not gonna let go that easily... Know this is really 'into' your book, but the reading is easy and the dialogue great to follow! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck with future chapters! ;)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
Another great chapter, Barbara. So Noah's going to take the plunge and ask Sami to marry him, but Mom might have a thing or two to say about it. He's got his work cut out for him I think. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Another great chapter, Barbara. So Noah's going to take the plunge and ask Sami to marry him, but Mom might have a thing or two to say about it. He's got his work cut out for him I think. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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He has to solve some work issues first. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It seems strange that Marc showed up as Sami was returning to her apartment for the first time in weeks. Her father's concern about his daughter marrying a man in Noah's job is certainly well-earned. Her mother seems to just want them to get married.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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It seems strange that Marc showed up as Sami was returning to her apartment for the first time in weeks. Her father's concern about his daughter marrying a man in Noah's job is certainly well-earned. Her mother seems to just want them to get married.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Written and edited well. Marc just happens to show up and the right time after how long? I mean no harm, but I would advise against 2D men harassing your female protagonist (for some reason) and not taking no for an answer. This happens often. Not saying you can't do what you want in your stories, just something to think about.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Written and edited well. Marc just happens to show up and the right time after how long? I mean no harm, but I would advise against 2D men harassing your female protagonist (for some reason) and not taking no for an answer. This happens often. Not saying you can't do what you want in your stories, just something to think about.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you or the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Mateo would have to show up at an inappropriate time. How dare he suggest she re-home Jaster? That would be a deal breaker. Why didn't he know about the dog before this? Noah might have run his proposal by Sami before approaching her father, but he was being admirably old-fashioned. You end the post without letting us in on what Laura has to say, although she is thankful for Noah taking care of Sami. Wonder what Noah has in mind about his future career plans? He seems to have something in mind. Notes: What are you two up to, not too. Alike, not a like. Great work with this novel. I admire the development. judi
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Mateo would have to show up at an inappropriate time. How dare he suggest she re-home Jaster? That would be a deal breaker. Why didn't he know about the dog before this? Noah might have run his proposal by Sami before approaching her father, but he was being admirably old-fashioned. You end the post without letting us in on what Laura has to say, although she is thankful for Noah taking care of Sami. Wonder what Noah has in mind about his future career plans? He seems to have something in mind. Notes: What are you two up to, not too. Alike, not a like. Great work with this novel. I admire the development. judi
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Mateo didn't show up, it was Marc her old boyfriend. I am tying up loose ends. Thank you for the kind review.
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Sorry about the confusion. It makes sense now. Got the names confused. judi
