Love's First Whisper
The moment before birth.16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is really lovely, Patty, and so heart warming. There is nothing nicer for a mother as feeling the first movement of their unborn baby. It is a gift we should cherish. I love the picture too. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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That is really lovely, Patty, and so heart warming. There is nothing nicer for a mother as feeling the first movement of their unborn baby. It is a gift we should cherish. I love the picture too. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A very poetic look at pregnancy and the beauty of life here.
In terms of presentation, maybe consider increasing your font size as the actual poem gets lost beneath the excellently selected picture when it should be speaking the loudest.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
A very poetic look at pregnancy and the beauty of life here.
In terms of presentation, maybe consider increasing your font size as the actual poem gets lost beneath the excellently selected picture when it should be speaking the loudest.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This whisper of love is such a miracle and when it happened to me I was so delighted, I enjoyed your fine words here to describe the result of loves seed, love Dolly x x x
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This whisper of love is such a miracle and when it happened to me I was so delighted, I enjoyed your fine words here to describe the result of loves seed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
A fantastic poem for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your poem is properly formated to meet the contest rule. 'Soft wispers of love' is of great interest to me. Well done, dear. And good luck in the contest.
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A fantastic poem for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your poem is properly formated to meet the contest rule. 'Soft wispers of love' is of great interest to me. Well done, dear. And good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. A lovely description of the moment before giving birth. It's so amazing that even inside, they can hear their mother's voice and already have that bond with her. Nicely written. Good luck
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. A lovely description of the moment before giving birth. It's so amazing that even inside, they can hear their mother's voice and already have that bond with her. Nicely written. Good luck
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
This is beautiful on so many levels Patty. The artwork tells the story as well.
Excellent 5/7/5 poem. Like a haiku, the first 2 lines are grammatically connected and the last line (the satori) is a lovely aha line.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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This is beautiful on so many levels Patty. The artwork tells the story as well.
Excellent 5/7/5 poem. Like a haiku, the first 2 lines are grammatically connected and the last line (the satori) is a lovely aha line.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2024