Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

How'd you find out so much about my past life? Only kidding. But the first thing my wife did was show me how to dress. She was always right about those things. I'm glad she overlooked all my other shortcomings.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

I dressed all my guys, cut their hair too. Most of us like to fuss over our men. We are usually right.:-)
Thanks for the read, I appreciate your time. Karen

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this story/poem contest entry. I feel a little sorry for Harold. It seems he has quite a few issues, but it makes for an excellent entry. Good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

Yep, Harold never gave thought to what he needed to bring into a relationship. He thought they all would adapt themselves to him. Common male flaw. :-) Thanks for the read and nice comments. Karen

reply by barbara.wilkey on 14-Nov-2024

There are a lot of people out there like Harold.

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

Amen sister. :-)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is an interesting poem that you have written about Harold. He does not sound like a dream to a whole lotta people and he doesn't sound like a dream to me. May you have a wonderful day and a good weekend. Patricia.

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

Poor Harold sees only the surface, so he does not really see them at all. He sees no need to adjust himself in order to be a better partner. He will need to adapt or be alone. Karen