Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
A delightful free verse here which reminds us that we are all part of nature, created and loved by God. Beautifully presented, this is a pleasure to see and read. Debbie
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. 😊
Gypsy
Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
Shelly,
This is a great poem. If we stay close to God we can bloom like a seed. The picture you used sets the tone of the poem. Is this a style you made up or is it actually a thing. I am still learning all these
different styles.
Great job.
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day 😊
Free verse is an old poetic form. It has no rules.
Gypsy
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 14-Nov-2024
You are welcome. That's why I like free form. I can write anything and not have to follow rules.
Cecilia