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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Bill's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from BethShelby
LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I didn't notice the October 31 deadline until it was November.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious Bill and I am glad you joined in the fun here with your version. I was splitting my sides laughing at your inventive post which is so entertaining and I am so glad I had one six left to award you for this post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This is hilarious Bill and I am glad you joined in the fun here with your version. I was splitting my sides laughing at your inventive post which is so entertaining and I am so glad I had one six left to award you for this post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. I was late to the party.
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At least you came x x x