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Snow White: The Sequel

Could the Following Have Happened?

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Comment from Begin Again
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One of these times, tom, we are going to hear you singing "They're coming to take me away. Ha! Ha!" and thereafter, your crazy wondering will be coming from a padded room. Since I enjoyed writing the final chapters to Rebecca and Gretchen's story, I tend to think it wonderful to write new endings to fables...but I don't know how your mind comes up with these thoughts.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Neither do I
    They come as I sleep
    Then I hit the keyboard and run the maze unknowing where I'll end up
Comment from Sugarray77
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You are so crazy, Tom! I loved your rambling version of ... life after Snow White... your wonderful sense of humor shines brightly and is a worthy read. I wish you luck, you crazy nut!

Melissa

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thanks
    It all began when I was nine
    The dentist put me to sleep with laughing gas
    There I envisioned being chained like a dog in a dark black world with a hole of light in the center
    The chain was anchored to the circumference and ever since I have been running in circles
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thanks
    It all began when I was nine
    The dentist put me to sleep with laughing gas
    There I envisioned being chained like a dog in a dark black world with a hole of light in the center
    The chain was anchored to the circumference and ever since I have been running in circles
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thanks
    It all began when I was nine
    The dentist put me to sleep with laughing gas
    There I envisioned being chained like a dog in a dark black world with a hole of light in the center
    The chain was anchored to the circumference and ever since I have been running in circles