Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "You Said What?"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm looking forward to that part! I'd like to see Mr Tomlin put away. Those sorts think they can get away with anything. I still think Dougie is up to something. He's not there for his son, that's for sure. Another excellent chapter in this great story, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I'm looking forward to that part! I'd like to see Mr Tomlin put away. Those sorts think they can get away with anything. I still think Dougie is up to something. He's not there for his son, that's for sure. Another excellent chapter in this great story, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I think you are right about Dougie being up to no good. He is definitely not the most trustworthy. thank you for the exceptional review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Miranda is so cool. I love her retort to Dougie about dressing sexy for the predator teacher. Hopefully, Miranda will come up with a better solution with the principal. She is definitely the real parent in the picture!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Miranda is so cool. I love her retort to Dougie about dressing sexy for the predator teacher. Hopefully, Miranda will come up with a better solution with the principal. She is definitely the real parent in the picture!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think Miranda might let this renewed relationship between Waylon and Duggie play out for enough time for Waylon to understand his Father and make his own mind up about him, after all he is not a child anymore. The Teacher's behaviour is a bit worrying and I hope Miranda is able to flush out any illegal activity there. Another fine chapter Gretchen, always a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I think Miranda might let this renewed relationship between Waylon and Duggie play out for enough time for Waylon to understand his Father and make his own mind up about him, after all he is not a child anymore. The Teacher's behaviour is a bit worrying and I hope Miranda is able to flush out any illegal activity there. Another fine chapter Gretchen, always a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Why would an ex mother is law listen to her? And, if she wants Dougie gone, hit him up for child support, and ask where he is living so his son can move in. That'll make him run like a scalded cat. Karen
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Why would an ex mother is law listen to her? And, if she wants Dougie gone, hit him up for child support, and ask where he is living so his son can move in. That'll make him run like a scalded cat. Karen
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Her former mother-in-law is Waylons principal. Miranda and her don't get along but she's hoping at least she'll be watching Mr. Tomlin for questionable behavior. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
This is interesting. With Dougie back, I'm learning a little bit about some things that happened in the past before I got hooked on this story. Miranda does hesitate if she thinks something may be going like with the kid who is Walon's class.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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This is interesting. With Dougie back, I'm learning a little bit about some things that happened in the past before I got hooked on this story. Miranda does hesitate if she thinks something may be going like with the kid who is Walon's class.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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It'll be fun to see the interaction between her MIL and Miranda. They have a very passive aggressive relationship. Thank you forbthis. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Aah, Tomlins sounds like a sleaze as well as a bully, a most unpleasant character, and he sounds like he's got something on another boy, a good thing that he's reported, a bully too, there's little students can do against them, except report them, they're catching a few here these days, but they've aged, beautifully written, blessings Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Aah, Tomlins sounds like a sleaze as well as a bully, a most unpleasant character, and he sounds like he's got something on another boy, a good thing that he's reported, a bully too, there's little students can do against them, except report them, they're catching a few here these days, but they've aged, beautifully written, blessings Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you for this Roy. Tomlin does need to be stopped, but will Miranda's mother-in-law listen to her? There is no love lost there. Gretchen
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She'll have to I think,
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This meeting with Dougie is every bit as testy as imagined. You never disappoint, Gretchen, with the force of your dialogue and your reader is willing Miranda on all the way. As for Mr Tomlin, this is quite a development and I can't imagine Miranda having a passive approach to it. Dougie's colloquialisms are excellent, by the way, and very credible. In short, a great and enjoyable chapter, so easy to pick up on again. Thank you, Gretchen. Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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This meeting with Dougie is every bit as testy as imagined. You never disappoint, Gretchen, with the force of your dialogue and your reader is willing Miranda on all the way. As for Mr Tomlin, this is quite a development and I can't imagine Miranda having a passive approach to it. Dougie's colloquialisms are excellent, by the way, and very credible. In short, a great and enjoyable chapter, so easy to pick up on again. Thank you, Gretchen. Debbie
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you. I started out being politically correct but I just knew that Dougie would be crass. Hope no one is offended but if they are, oh well. Gretchen
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No I love it. Brave and real (and you qualified the terminology which was right to do)
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent chapter. A dramatic twist with Tomlin turning out to be a predator! And to find out that Missy was the one who helped Dougie get away! Was that in all the letters she wrote from prison, which M didn't read? Engrossing story. Very well written.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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An excellent chapter. A dramatic twist with Tomlin turning out to be a predator! And to find out that Missy was the one who helped Dougie get away! Was that in all the letters she wrote from prison, which M didn't read? Engrossing story. Very well written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Doubt Missy would give a straight answer. She would probably try to get Miranda to jump through a few hoops for the information. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
I really loved your chapter. Your book flows very nicely. I did't see any errors. You can feel Miranda's dislike of Dougie through your words. You did an awesome with this chapter. I think you you have a great book in the works.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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I really loved your chapter. Your book flows very nicely. I did't see any errors. You can feel Miranda's dislike of Dougie through your words. You did an awesome with this chapter. I think you you have a great book in the works.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and the review. Gretchen