Truckin
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Comment from GeorgeAnn Castles
This chapter brought tears to my eyes... we depend on these brave drivers to get the stuff we want to buy into our stores...YES! They are brave for even being on the road. Your story has made me appreciate them more. He didn't want to loose his license...he lied by not telling ALL. I felt this so much as the policeman walked away. GREAT Writing!
GA
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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This chapter brought tears to my eyes... we depend on these brave drivers to get the stuff we want to buy into our stores...YES! They are brave for even being on the road. Your story has made me appreciate them more. He didn't want to loose his license...he lied by not telling ALL. I felt this so much as the policeman walked away. GREAT Writing!
GA
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. Your review means a great deal to me.
Comment from Gayla putnam
As I read, I felt like a long-distance trucker caught up in adventures on the road with crazy drivers in big rigs. I had trouble understanding a couple of sentences. "Unnecessarily lording it in the passing lane was infrequent." (Is lording a trucker phrase?) and " He hoped that along with the absence of my sunglasses would be enough."?????? I did like your names for the big rigs. It added color to the story. No pun intended, Big Chartreuse. The encounter with the trooper adds tension to the story, and I await the consequences in the next chapter. Gayla
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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As I read, I felt like a long-distance trucker caught up in adventures on the road with crazy drivers in big rigs. I had trouble understanding a couple of sentences. "Unnecessarily lording it in the passing lane was infrequent." (Is lording a trucker phrase?) and " He hoped that along with the absence of my sunglasses would be enough."?????? I did like your names for the big rigs. It added color to the story. No pun intended, Big Chartreuse. The encounter with the trooper adds tension to the story, and I await the consequences in the next chapter. Gayla
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you. I'll try to fix the text.
"Unnecessarily lording it in the passing lane was infrequent." By 'lording it', I mean to dominate, or commandeer, the passing lane.
Thank you for your help.
Comment from knowledge
Very well written. You have the gift of description without being tedious. Your story flows well keeping your reader interested in your plot. Keep up the good work. Great picture for your story.
Your friend Knowledge.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Very well written. You have the gift of description without being tedious. Your story flows well keeping your reader interested in your plot. Keep up the good work. Great picture for your story.
Your friend Knowledge.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your supportive review.
And thank you immensely for the six stars!
Comment from royowen
I love the adventures of Clyde who sounds like he's become something of a vigilante trying to police the highways and byways, to bring truck drivers to halt in their adventures, well done Wayne, blessings Roy
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I love the adventures of Clyde who sounds like he's become something of a vigilante trying to police the highways and byways, to bring truck drivers to halt in their adventures, well done Wayne, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you. He's doing what he can, hoping to avenge his wife's death at the hand of a trucker.
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Understandable