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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Yardier
This is a good poem. Its short lines strengthen the emotion of grieving for a loved one that is in Heaven. It shows how hard it is for us to wait for the reunion.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your day and week.
Joan
P S Just to let you know, I just published a book called The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry, by Joan Pechter which is available on Amazon.com.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    I'm glad you liked it, Joan. I really appreciate your review.

    BTW back at you. I just purchased your book. I'm in the process of editing my book via/friends to publish with Amazon/Kindle.

    I'll make sure you get the notice when it is released.

    Thanks again, Yardier.
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Oct-2024
    Don't mention it, Yardier.
    I'll wait for the notification.
    Joan
Comment from Begin Again
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Ten yers ago today, my daughter left us and I pray that she with my parents and husband are waiting, patiently, for when it is my turn to join them. A lovely poem promising Together Again.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Carol. "We shall gather at the river..."
Comment from Kahlani
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Hi Yardier, what a delightful poem. And the two children in the photo are adorable. This is the first time I have read a vignette. It's beautifully crafted and set out. I love the way it flows and then peters out. Lovely poem.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Kahlani. I appreciate your feed back. You are so right, you nailed the juxtaposition.

    All the best, Yard.
Comment from ESOSTINE
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I certainly believe in the theme of your poem. There is greater joy across the river, yet we shall strive to have a share of the joy of our today. Thanks so much, and good luck in the contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, ESOSTINE. I appreciate your feed back. You are so right, you nailed the juxtaposition.

    All the best, Yard.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
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A beautiful poem which spells out, though we have much joy here that we feel will be hard to leave, there is a greater joy we have to look forward to.
Succinct, true and very uplifting. Thank you.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Shirley. You are so right, you nailed the juxtaposition.
    I appreciate the feed back.
    All the best, Yard.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi there! It's so good to seeing you back. It's certainly been a while. This is a lovely free verse for the contest. I really enjoyed reading it. All the best of luck, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Hi there back at ya! Yes, you could say, I took a sabbatical, changed the oil, rotated the tires and hit the road with a full tank of hopeful expectations.
    I was not disappointed.

    Yard

reply by Ulla on 17-Oct-2024
    That is great to hear:)
Comment from Annmuma
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This post really rang a bell with me! It says a lot and on so many levels. We are always waiting for some reconnection with those we love or loved and lost. the photo is perfect to add depth to the words. Good luck in the contest. ann

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Ann. I so appreciate the six but more than that, I am encouraged by your insight.
    A bit of trivia regarding the photo: The children (grand kids) are fishing from the stump of a massive Giant Sequoia.
reply by Annmuma on 20-Oct-2024
    Giant Sequoia stump -- just one more reminder that the might might fall, but their existence continues to be felt for many years after them -- good or bad. ann
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I believe only God can give us pure joy. I'm happy to see you posted again. I miss your writing. I wish you'd post more often. I hope you're doing well.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Hello, Barbara. Your web site is looking great. I'm still working on mine. I'll keep you posted.
reply by barbara.wilkey on 16-Oct-2024
    Please do. I miss you.
Comment from Sally Law
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Welcome back to FanStory, Yard. I know I am! I feel the Lord's coming is close and before we know it, we'll be in Heaven with Him and those waiting. A beautiful poem filled with hope.

Sending along my very best today as always.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much Sally Law. Yes, indeed, we all want to get 'there'. It's just down the road you know, the one called the 'Life Time Highway.'
    What is that old gospel song: 'We shall gather at the river...' I'm sure you know it and are looking forward to that day.
    All the very best back to you my friend. Yard
    All the best, Yard.
Comment from Nicki Nance
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Your graphic was a nice introduction to this joy inviting poem and your wish in the comment. I especially like the reminder that it is always waiting.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, NIcki. I appreciate your feed back.
    All the best, Yard.