Autumn Falls
free verse15 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
It most certainly does know how to cheat us out of what we love with Summer we know it is inevitable this year and every year so we might as well face it
FALL or Autumn, here it is a beautiful time, but it iw also an introduction of what is to come. Winter. And that is normally the worst for our state of Minnesota.
Yuck, Ugh, oh crap, and all those other sophisticated words we use to describe it. LOL. Love your poem, dear Bill. Love, Debi
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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It most certainly does know how to cheat us out of what we love with Summer we know it is inevitable this year and every year so we might as well face it
FALL or Autumn, here it is a beautiful time, but it iw also an introduction of what is to come. Winter. And that is normally the worst for our state of Minnesota.
Yuck, Ugh, oh crap, and all those other sophisticated words we use to describe it. LOL. Love your poem, dear Bill. Love, Debi
It m
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debi
Comment from jim vecchio
I like the way you utilized the font colors.You didn't even need n illustration. I believe this will do very well in the contest. You did not need anymore unnecessary words. Three lines for each. You aced it!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I like the way you utilized the font colors.You didn't even need n illustration. I believe this will do very well in the contest. You did not need anymore unnecessary words. Three lines for each. You aced it!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Jim
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Thanks for writing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The changing season from sunny days to falling leaves here Bill and I enjoyed your free write for the contest and and wish you luck, our trees will soon be bare, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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The changing season from sunny days to falling leaves here Bill and I enjoyed your free write for the contest and and wish you luck, our trees will soon be bare, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Same here, Dolly.
Comment from lyenochka
The final line "autumn falls upon the world" is very profound somehow with the double meaning of "fall". Well, at least for the top half of the world anyway. With the trees' announcement, I guess it's raking time! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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The final line "autumn falls upon the world" is very profound somehow with the double meaning of "fall". Well, at least for the top half of the world anyway. With the trees' announcement, I guess it's raking time! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I wish these trees would clean up their own mess.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written free verse for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest after a very hot summer here we are finally beginning to turn the corner and maybe in the next day or two we will find that we have daytime temperatures less than 100°. It's been an awfully hot summer here Patricia.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This is a very well written free verse for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest after a very hot summer here we are finally beginning to turn the corner and maybe in the next day or two we will find that we have daytime temperatures less than 100°. It's been an awfully hot summer here Patricia.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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The cold days live here, Patricia.
