Ill Met On A Western Hillside
entry for co-existing worlds14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Met on a Western Hillside, certainly takes an odd route to get Dr. Ferguson blown away by someone who was still in 1873. In wonder where this leaves Abe Wunderly.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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This story, Met on a Western Hillside, certainly takes an odd route to get Dr. Ferguson blown away by someone who was still in 1873. In wonder where this leaves Abe Wunderly.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Maybe a need for a sequel? "The Good, The Bad, And The Spooky"?
Comment from Begin Again
I guess that would be a good adage to remember since they seem to live by different rules. Nicely presented and enjoyable to read. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I guess that would be a good adage to remember since they seem to live by different rules. Nicely presented and enjoyable to read. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from DonandVicki
a short but interesting story. I like the idea of time travel in the dreamscape. The line I enjoyed the most was: "What I'm trying to say is this woman, she's been seeing you in her dreams. So, I went into her subconscious-that is, her mind, and saw you, so I called you here- You're in the future!" well done.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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a short but interesting story. I like the idea of time travel in the dreamscape. The line I enjoyed the most was: "What I'm trying to say is this woman, she's been seeing you in her dreams. So, I went into her subconscious-that is, her mind, and saw you, so I called you here- You're in the future!" well done.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Many thanks. I love exalting God or writing on the human condition, but sometimes I just have some fun!
Comment from Scott Burkhalter
I loved the image - Eastwood is the best. This was a very creative use of dreams, ghosts and reality. There was not a lot of space to blend two worlds so, for me, the story was a little abstract. I wasn't real clear on why the guy was a doctor and a ghost whisper or who the guy was that shot him. It definitely shows a lot of promise and seriously unique creativity.
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I loved the image - Eastwood is the best. This was a very creative use of dreams, ghosts and reality. There was not a lot of space to blend two worlds so, for me, the story was a little abstract. I wasn't real clear on why the guy was a doctor and a ghost whisper or who the guy was that shot him. It definitely shows a lot of promise and seriously unique creativity.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I had just finished a longer story, so I tried to keep this as short as possible.